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KNDnumbuh8 — 'I love you.'
Published: 2009-04-08 16:44:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 791; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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SKECTH: [link]Well, it's finished!
I took 2 weeks on this! 
OMG, no?? 
I have nothing to say... and it didn't came out like what I imagine. Please enjoy! ^^
Oh, and I didn't put a big blush on the girl.
It looked horrible that way. 
Fruits Basket style (50%?) @ Natsuki Takaya
Kyo Sohma @ Natsuki Takaya
Astrid @ *KNDnumbuh8
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Hmmm you requested a critique, so I'll give it my best.
I noticed the phrase 'untill now' which is a typo. It should be 'until now'.
As for the art itself, I've never read fruit basket, so I'll comment as it is. Anatomy-wise, the hands can be a bit bigger, and the lower body is slightly too short.
Other than that, the colors give awesome and effective contrast between the characters, with the boy giving out mostly warm colors, and the girl (you e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Cloth designs look simple, but effective (I especially like the girl's design).
You can accomplish a level of shading that I'm still struggling with. Combined with the natural-looking creases of the cloths, it gives everything a great look (texture's a bit too smooth, but it's great anyway).
I found the girl's expression and pose to imply that she's froze up. It's not bad (considering the guy probably just went in a kiss her and she wasn't expecting it), but it does take that feeling of complete 'fluffiness' away like there might be doubt.
Overall, despite some things I said, this is certainly one of your best works and I'm proud to say that at this current state, I can never do something as awesome as this. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Very well done, Astrid! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you SO much, Alvin! 
I'm not that good at drawing manga, but I'm glad I can draw a part of it.
Thanks so much! It means so much to me!
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You're welcome! You still do a lot better than I do, so be proud of your abilities, but never forget to always strive for better!
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Well, Astrid, since you asked for it...e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h… " width="38" height="15" alt="
I must say, when I first saw this in on my Message page, I believed it was just absolutely lovely...I still think that now, only moreso. Everything about this picture is just cute, wonderful, and awesome...Kyo looks just great, and he certainly seems interested in the kiss e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
So, it took two weeks to complete...I believe the results are just excellent. Fine art does take time, you know^^. Well done, Astrid e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Holy crap, THANKS SO MUCH! 
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Awwww right back at'ya! 
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aw, sis! this is gorgeous
your getting better and better with every picture
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Really??
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ohhh, thanks a bunch
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awwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet ^^ i love it ^^ *faves*
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Too bad it looks horrible. 
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*laughs and smiles* it does not look horrible it looks great ^^ and your welcome ^^ you sound pretty sweet yourself ^^
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