CrazyMai [2014-10-17 17:26:53 +0000 UTC]
A really beautiful and powerful poem.
My favourite line is "Until there are no more horizon" which just perfectly describes this feeling of wanting to leave..
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SautterArtist [2014-09-19 00:31:47 +0000 UTC]
A great poem. I really enjoyed it. You have some wonderful visuals: worn out shoes, leaving the people that know you, taking nothing with you. Everything conveys a sense of desperation.
My favorite line: "Until there are no more horizons." Somehow sums up the poem for me.
Well written, good job.
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