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arsenedaubrecq [2012-12-10 20:43:47 +0000 UTC]
Superb story! It kept me looking for the next paragraph for the whole page. A lovely and exciting reading!
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arsenedaubrecq In reply to knottysilkscarf [2012-12-11 11:43:13 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome: you're very talented with writing these intriguing, sexy tales.
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knottysilkscarf In reply to morpheus-cf [2012-12-07 03:01:55 +0000 UTC]
So what do you think should happen? Do you think that Maria escapes? If so, does she avoid being sold? And what about the Princess? She was kidnapped by a different group of people for different reasons...at least partially different reasons...I suspect that the Princess will have some sexual adventures during her captivity. I have some ideas, but my stories write themselves. I think I know the endgame, but often things change as I write.
Will be reading your story tonight...it has been a strange week.
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knottysilkscarf In reply to morpheus-cf [2012-12-07 07:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Well those are interesting possibilities. Still...
If Maria gets recaptured, what fun is that?
Find the Princess...how? The kidnappers are long gone...unless she happens on them by chance, but that seems unlikely.
How would Maria even know Helen? Poor girl knowing a rich socialite? And poor Helen has her hands (or other parts of her body) full playing cops and robbers with her boyfriend. Don't think she is interested in getting revenge.
Surely there is a plot twist yet to come? Maybe she goes home and isn't a major character after all? There is something you haven't considered that will be revealed in the next chapter.
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morpheus-cf In reply to knottysilkscarf [2012-12-07 11:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I'm sure there are all manner of things I haven't considered. But you asked me what I thought might happen, and based on what I've read so far, that's what I came up with.
Of course, it's far more likely that Maria would stumble upon the bound & gagged bodyguard Carie in the car just outside Mrs. Wilcott's mansion. It would be one of the few remaining cars there, if not the only one, and with her adrenaline pumping, Maria's hearing might just be acute enough to detect Carie's muffled cries for help. And I'm sure Carie would be motivated to look for the Princess, and have the necessary training to find clues to her kidnapper's whereabouts (if the author is so inclined, that is).
Anyway, this is merely speculation on my part. I'm sure you have wilder stuff to throw at us in the next chapter.
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