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Published: 2014-11-30 23:34:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 937; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 6
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I was going to do a pun, but I couldn't think of a goodβ¦punch line Β
Still not the best with colors
Here's my reference League of Fighters - Vi
You Cant hurt my feelings with constructive criticism, so Critic away!!!
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Hi!
I found this piece at a group were critics are needed and so I decided to drop by and share a few tips
The general idea is pretty cool. I would advice you to try a stronger set of shades, as I can tell, you get the general idea of shading so applying darker shades would make your coloring look better by adding some depth sense. On traditional art, it may sound like a hard task but that's far from truth, let's say you're shading the top cloth (red neck and such), I'd use orange and maybe some yellow to the areas where light strikes the fabric and some brown, blue and purple for the dark shades. When black clothes are used, gray, white, blue and red are your best allies. As for the skin and hair, which share pinkish hues, I'd advice orange and red and even blue
Blending mechanical limbs with organical body is never easy. On this topic, I'd say you work a little more on the left glove (drawing's left). From the right one, I can tell the mechanical arm/forearm goes along with the girl's and she's stretching her arm towards the viewer, so maybe the forearm should be bent and a little less visible. Of course, that depends on the organical arm's position, but judging from the girl's fingers and the way they are shown, I assumed the position and thought of my previous comment
Still on the anatomical section, I feel the head is a little too big. Googles are usually tightened around the skull and so you can tell the skull's size. Also, ears often lie on a parallel line to the skull so according to the pose, it should be smaller.
But of course this is only an opinion. Either way, keep on practicing!
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Thanks for the critic
Yeah the shading is a bit off, i was going for a sort of comic book flavor.
I feel like I should have drawn it with the goggle strap covering the top corner of her ear to convey dimensions better. And i did have a hard time with the left arm too, like i drew her elbow in, but then it looked too weird and 2D, so it's supposed to look here like her arm is extended.
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Alright, I really enjoy what you did here with the colors and such, but I will say a few things, namely, It deals with her face. To Me, in this picture, her lips seem a bit...off, they get almost too thin near the edges. I also see Vi with more of a....Stalwart kind of expression, more serious rather than manic. Also, she seems younger than usual for some reason, perhaps the shape of the face is throwing me off, but those are the only things I could Really take a note of, other then that, its a pretty good piece. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much for the critique.
I think her head is a little too big (Making her look younger than I wanted) and her eyes are too big (giving her that I just did drugs manic look.) Also this is just my interpretation; I actually pictured her as more punkish and childish whilst Caitlyn was her more serious counterpart wild.
Thanks againΒ Β
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I love the details, it's cool and I love it!
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