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kodos11 — Closing Time, Part 4
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Published: 2019-07-26 05:32:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 30552; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 733
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In town for the day, Kelli is hungry for something from the Muffin Top, while Mara has an insatiable appetite for something that's likely to get both of them in trouble.Related content
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Wish I'd caught this months ago, I blame DA lol
Lovely tale as always, certainly darker than most I've seen from you- and while I'm not absolutely sold yet on Mara's dominatrix, man-stealing sorta attempts, it's also a fascinating spin on the character. I can absolutely see the life of a baker, deliciously overfattened as she is, being a bit of a lonely one and prone to...well, doing exactly what she did.
Plus, bravo on writing a boy with the honor to let his wife know beforehand- and that created quite the twist! Cuminflation is pretty rare here, but it was a treat to see you go that route!
Someone needs to get Mara a boy, or perhaps Chrissie can grow a lil something between the thighs 
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That always happens to me too; I'll randomly check in one someone I watch and find out they posted something that I somehow completely managed to miss.
I kind of went back and forth on the whole darker tone; I wanted to explore that side of things a little bit but not go so far that I alienated the folks who read my stuff expecting more of a "cozy expansion story" vibe. I kind of felt like Mara was the right character to do it with, since she's never really faced any consequences for fattening up all those girls over the years, usually not telling them exactly how big they were going to get by the time she was finished with them.
One thing that always gets me in stories is the whole porno thing where someone is like, "hey, cheat on your wife/girlfriend/whatever and do me!" and characters always jump at the chance. I know it sounds weird to make a stand for traditional fidelity in relationships in a story with some heavy non-consensual stuff, but I'm glad you liked the twist. I'd kind of been wanting to work a little more cumflation into a story and this one seemed like a good fit, though I think it'll be a while before I do any more of that.
Regarding Mara's future, I'm not sure I could do a good job of the whole futa thing, and besides, I kind of see Mara and Chrissie as two women who are really close, and since Mara's had a rough history with men and Chrissie's dating life is kind of hit or miss, well, sometimes they get lonely and things happen. If I can think of a guy worthy of winning Mara's heart (and all the rest of her too) I'd be up for writing a story where she gets a bit more of a healthy relationship.
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Mmmm, I can see that! 
Perhaps she'll need a confidant after she deflates and winds up at Chrissie's? I really enjoyed the way you worked in a traditional relationship with this series, and honestly- I think Chrissie and Mara might be a very solid pairing for both of their tastes and needs- plus, Mara does always seem to fatten her up anyhow. Almost seems to me no guy is worthy of Mara's heart, but Chrissie could 
Plus, epic super-fat lesbian shenanigans are always enjoyable
PS: Futa is delightful, hard as Hades to write well, but absolutely something I am confident you could pull off.
Cheers!
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Good point; it's possible that Mara will feel a bit underwhelmed once she's brought down to her previous size and try to fill the void with something more than just sex and pastries. I could totally see doing a story that kind of formalized their chemistry into a more traditional arrangement.
I can't recall doing any real, serious, way too massive to be realistic, super-fat lesbian shenanigans since Vicky and Victoria, so I may just be overdue to turn my hand to a little of that once more.
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It's possible indeed!
Oooh, that was a favorite series of mine!
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No worries; it was fun to try and write something that really pushed some boundaries, but I'm definitely going to be going back to the whole "Cozy Voluptuous Weigh Gain Romance" thing for a while after this.
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This one was a dark one Kudos, but it was good nonetheless.
Tbh, I was expecting the husband to be in a submissive situation with his wife and either Mara, or Chrissie, having their way with him,
completely at their mercy.
P.S. (I would've loved to have Mara drink from that sweet nectar from Kelli's breasts and grow fatter from the process)
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Thank you; I was kind of on the fence about how dark to go with this one, but I'm glad to hear it worked.
I've been kicking around doing another chapter of "A Pliable Woman" or "As Much as She Can Take" where the whole two huge, enthusiastic girls give a guy a good going over plays a big part, so you may well see something of the sort in the not too distant future.
I think Mara's earned a bit of a rest after everything, but I wouldn't be surprised if she and Kelli cross paths again and more nursing and growing goes down.
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Good grief I thought poor Mara was done for a couple of times there. Clearly she needs to go into the dairy business and get more help before she and Chrissie destroy the store on accident or really hurting them
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You know, that's not a bad idea- it might be time for Mara and Chrissie to set their sights on larger business opportunities. I've been thinking of doing a story around a human dairy, how a girl gets a job there and what happens to her after, so that might be a fun way to tie it in to my existing characters.
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Well considering how much milk those two alone produce, especially after a really gluttonous binge, wouldn’t surprise me if Mara uses it instead of normal diary for her baking
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This is a pleasant surprise, looking forward to reading
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Thanks, I hope it turns out to be worth the read!
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