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Published: 2013-07-28 10:23:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Done on one layer in Paint tool Sai. The foreground could have been done much better, but I figure this is good enough to move out of the scrapbook.

... Though, I should probably give it a name better than "blargh." Oh well.
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sfried0 [2013-11-13 07:15:33 +0000 UTC]

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Composition wise, it could use more foreground elements. The background seems to get lost in the clouds but I don't know if that was intentional or not. Still, great blending of colors, and the way each hill has a different value gives a nice sense of depth! There is one stray flower on the distance that doesn't seem to scale correctly though, and it would be nice to have more defined grass.

With more color variety and contrast, this would make for a fantastic piece. Not bad at all on your attempt. Experiment more with color contrasts. Try getting some more definition in.

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