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Monseo [2018-12-19 02:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Hi there, saw your work in ProjectComment .

You have a lot of good elements working together here, the scene itself is light and cheerful colourisitcally. Very vibrant and the colour choices are on the bold side which matches nicely with the conflict your characters are in. It looks like some sort of canyon or large drop is just one step back.

Pairing the dark clouds with the fellow holding the blade, has a nice contrast to the two characters in the foreground that appear to be associated with light. Even if they all look a little bit on the shifty side.

Proportionally, given the style - the plants grass strands, rocks and bodies are relatively well balanced. Arms and legs within reason. Perhaps the bladed fellows head could be a tad bit smaller (for a more reasonable head to neck to shoulder transition). & Maybe more stable footing in preparation for a fight. A strong grounded stance, would look great with an electrified blade as a weapon.

I love the amount of detail you've incorporated into the background, study up a little on anatomy and you should be able to add just the right amount of detail to your characters as well.

It's cute, fun, and just the right amount of mischief.

Keep up the great work! Merry Christmas and have a great day!

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kolgarave In reply to Monseo [2018-12-19 08:14:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for feedback!

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OutlanderS3S [2018-12-17 00:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! I am enjoying the vibrant colors. It's pleasant on the eyes and you did a fantastic job on the flora in the foreground and background. The art piece, although digital, replicates the style of an oil painting. What catches my eye are the dark clouds coming from the left side. It sets the mood that something dark and foreboding is about to happen.


What needs improvement are the faces of each character. They seem to be flat. The eyes and mouths look painted on rather than actual faces. Try adding a dark stroke above and between the eye and eyelid to make them look natural.


I guess that's it! All in all, this is a beautiful piece of artwork!


A member from ProjectComment

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kolgarave In reply to OutlanderS3S [2018-12-17 13:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback!

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OutlanderS3S In reply to kolgarave [2018-12-17 18:26:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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TypeSly [2018-12-16 04:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I don't have constructive critisism for you. But I just love it.Β 

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kolgarave In reply to TypeSly [2018-12-16 07:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you^^

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KeenTigerClaw [2018-12-13 07:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow. The coloring is astounding, and that background is screaming: β€˜Fantasy world.’ A bit of constructive criticism however, I promise I’m not trying to be rude. I love the sword, and the position is a good concept. However, I feel as though the hands on the Blue and Pink character, (Forgive me I don’t know their names), they don’t seem..Quite right. I understand this is supposed to be a fantasy piece,just trying to be be helpful. All together really, it’s an amazing piece. Much better than what I can do haha.

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kolgarave In reply to KeenTigerClaw [2018-12-13 12:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for feedback!

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KrisLalev [2018-12-12 06:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Asolutely amazing coloring and brilliant setting and composition!!!! Brilliant work on the contrasting and the combo of the setting with the characters is spot on!!Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β 

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kolgarave In reply to KrisLalev [2018-12-12 17:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!Β Β Β 

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vinsky2002 [2018-10-31 13:09:21 +0000 UTC]

oh, wow! this is beautiful Β 

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Lostshibe [2018-10-29 03:21:55 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kolgarave In reply to Lostshibe [2018-10-29 07:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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2334242xiao [2018-10-22 20:40:59 +0000 UTC]

adorable~

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kolgarave In reply to 2334242xiao [2018-10-22 20:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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XxxfoREVerBVBXxx [2018-10-22 18:08:02 +0000 UTC]

So cute :3

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kolgarave In reply to XxxfoREVerBVBXxx [2018-10-22 18:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw! thank you ^^

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XxxfoREVerBVBXxx In reply to kolgarave [2018-10-22 18:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Np

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