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Published: 2010-02-25 00:28:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2379; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 719
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happy birthday hun, this is for youalso this what my art is starting to look like when i devote my full attention to it.
please let me know if it looks good or if theres anything i could change
of course the pose should have been more dynamic
but meh
EDIT: following some advice i made some minor changes
>shorter forearm
>more hair detail (want to keep a simplistic design, butt reealize it needs to be more scraggy-looking)
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you should edit this to look like teliko
it would please me
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i'll just draw teliko for you then
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Asking for advice huh? NEAT!
I'm not saying the things mentioned above, but there isn't so much shadings in the stomach-area and arms compared to the face and neck.
Either way, you're on the right track, keep it going!
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If anything jumped at me it might be that the hand may look slightly wonky. Like there's a bulge on the side maybe. But that's ok. And if I had to comment on the hair, I'd say not for nothing, it kind of looks like the same texture as F.F's, like it's a...Sherbert helmet of some sort. But the form looks fine I suppose, idk cause I suck at hair. Well anyway it's cool (Oh and neat new icon 
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thanks.
with the hand i tried to include the base of the thumb but giving the azngle it would be better if i had just left it alone ^^
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OH YEAH lol, yeah I guess you're right, man I hate that feeling of overcompensation sometimes, lol that seems to happen often :3 alright cool lol
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It was rather plain before, but now it looks adequate
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awesome, i'd do more
but i can't spend my whole life on this picture
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Well, the forearm business was mentioned in the comment before mine, but I should point out that is a tad too long.
The anatomy is right as far as I can tell and the background, while simplistic, suits right. The look in her eyes looks pretty nice.
You have improved a lot Now I have to get to drawan more, apparently. EVERYONE IS BESTING MY ASS.
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Forearm should be a little shorter. I'd also add detail to the hair - especially since you added detail to everything else, including the background.
Oh dem freckles~
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yeah i can see what you mean with the forearm,
and i was thinking of adding detail to the hair but i liked like it is
does the hair look out of place?
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