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irenerei [2013-05-01 12:28:57 +0000 UTC]
hi, there, I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder.
Despite the simple background, I really like the detail you have done on her clothes, very oriental in the patterns and the colors matches with each other and gives out some what spring feel. And the its also linked to the title Hanami, which let people straightly think of the cherry blossom in Japan.
like I have said, form what i see, the only flaw is the background.
Its my first time making a critique so, no offense. Juz here to help out ^^
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irenerei In reply to kondouyumi-tan [2013-05-02 00:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for replying dear. I am glad that my advice is helpful. I would like make a additional advise if you don't mind. The folding screen is easy to understand but it is too simple. Simple background can also be effective when you add perspective in it, give it a little directional twitch and things will turn out different even though the overall picture is easy. ^^
Have fun drawing~~
-Irene-
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irenerei In reply to kondouyumi-tan [2013-05-06 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]
^^ u r mostly welcome, will keep giving you advices if u dont mind ^^
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irenerei In reply to kondouyumi-tan [2013-05-08 04:11:04 +0000 UTC]
alright,will do so when i have time ^^
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