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Published: 2011-06-16 03:33:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Fall behind of all therest. Can not catch up. No hope.
Falling, falling down.
Help, I am alive.
Slowly sinking in despair.
There is no escape.
My heart is beating
like a hammer, the pressure
becoming too much.
The pressure is hell.
It is harder to breathe. Please,
Help, I am alive.
Soon, there is peace.
The frantic beating has gone.
Silence fills the air.
The pressure is gone;
lifted. I can now breathe. Such
beautiful peace. . .
No longer will I
call for help. For now I see,
I have been saved
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Comments: 5
I enjoy this. I really like the turn you put in at line 12. I see that as the call for help being answered which displays an innate trust in mankind that has been damaged, but not destroyed. It's a good display of the speaker's resiliance and on the whole as a commentary on the innate good of people. Well done. I would like to see more from you.
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