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KooboriSapphire In reply to diamondkitty1979 [2010-10-31 04:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Ugh, I knew something was wrong with his head DX Thanks for that.
Lol *solid
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Pakaku [2010-10-30 04:11:17 +0000 UTC]
If you had not written any backstory, I would never have related the character with Metal Gear. The design looks generic, the pose looks too causal, and he looks too muscular for a character that's supposed to be another Snake clone. And the anime eyes don't work for a character like that.
It's like you're trying too hard to deviate from Snake, while trying to relate it to the series somehow. Clones tend to be similar to each other, look at how similar Naked Snake and Solid Snake are.
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KooboriSapphire In reply to Pakaku [2010-10-30 04:19:26 +0000 UTC]
Well it is my style so it won't really look much like MGS.
Well I wanted to make him more like a normal teen than something extremely identical to Snake. I mean, I wanted to give this guy a normal teen look, & then maybe later on make him similar to Snake. Thanks for the info.
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Pakaku In reply to KooboriSapphire [2010-10-30 04:23:24 +0000 UTC]
Normal teens usually aren't so muscular. Is there a reason behind having a character that is 18, his physique, etc?
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Rivalhopeso [2010-10-20 21:07:46 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. you have very nice clean and bold lines. My style is so scratchy in comparison. This looks like it has been influenced by DBZ, am i right? Those huge arms are somewhat signature lol. the trousers are good because the simple folds are in the right place and make it look 3d.
However, talking of 3d, this drawing is completely devoid of shading and seriously, shading does a lot. Decide where your light source is coming from and go for it. you'll see a huge improvement!
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KooboriSapphire In reply to Rivalhopeso [2010-10-21 02:27:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, & no, I was influenced by everything else but DBZ (you see, I hate that anime). Lol the trousers.
And about shading, ehh, I don't really plan to, I plan to fuly color it once I get a tablet.
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KooboriSapphire In reply to Rivalhopeso [2010-10-21 20:57:08 +0000 UTC]
I know, but, Sailor Moon is more of a classic than DBZ any day.
Yeah, will do.
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44gatti [2010-10-20 20:32:13 +0000 UTC]
gosh! he's massssive! very well drawn, i like your style..have you thought about coloring it? (:
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LostOne77 [2010-10-20 20:18:52 +0000 UTC]
excellent work on the muscles, but a touch of shading would really make this wonderful.
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KooboriSapphire In reply to LostOne77 [2010-10-21 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, ehh, I might shade it, if I'm not too lazy.
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BlackFoxAsakura [2010-10-20 14:21:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is really nice characters. I see that You really like to draw a muscled characters and Your manga style is better and better.
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CaleAi [2010-10-20 04:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow the clothes look tight on him. cool.
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KooboriSapphire In reply to CaleAi [2010-10-20 06:33:57 +0000 UTC]
Lol including the pants? Anyways, thanks.
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DemonQueen17 [2010-10-19 23:26:15 +0000 UTC]
This looks really good. A badass in the making. Keep up the good work.
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