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koolkjm In reply to ibreakboys [2004-05-26 19:50:59 +0000 UTC]
thanks alot...I wanted to make the chapters short so i could do lots of them
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NikiP [2004-05-21 19:54:31 +0000 UTC]
very definat but like i said you may benefit from a proper critique try a group called....onewordatatime..... [link] there ya go! note me when epi 3 comes out!
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koolkjm In reply to NikiP [2004-05-21 19:56:38 +0000 UTC]
will do!!!
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Ringhearty [2004-05-19 20:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Ew bad picture lol but the story seems good I defiantly want to know more about these powers.
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koolkjm In reply to Ringhearty [2004-05-19 20:56:53 +0000 UTC]
well i will be changeing the pic...I allready have it half done...The story on the other hand is gonna be a week till done and good...Thanks alot
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Ringhearty In reply to koolkjm [2004-05-19 20:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Ops nah I didn't mean that picture lol I meant of the bodies scattered all over is a bad pic (Ya i am kind of a wuss o.0).
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koolkjm In reply to Ringhearty [2004-05-19 21:20:11 +0000 UTC]
lol...Im still changeing it... Ya it is kinda gross
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