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Illustration for DSR Chapter 10. Sunstreaker is critically injured during a horrific battle (chapter 9) He lies in medbay, treading the balance between life and death. His brother huddles in the corner, unable to stay, unable to leave, unable to cope.Related content
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The second, you say? what was the first? Or dare I ask? 
As for Midnight ... that's still on the back burner. I need to get back to the love story I was working on between Dr. Scott and Kayla. 
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I forgot...will this love story of Kyle and Kayla have any Mid in it? I want some more sentinel leader. I love that rascal. He's just too awesome for words.
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Uh, no. There's only one person who's read that story and she was miffed at me cuz I've not finished it yet. Have you considered writing a story? You know, if you do, you may have to re-introduce him to the world. I'm sure Birdgett wouldn't mind, since she's involved in another fandom, anyway
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I have...but the one I wrote made me so embarassed at the length and way of redundantly saying things, that I have yet to write a new story featuring him and his crazy bunch. I wish i knew a beta-reader who might help me make a story longer. If I knew one, I might try writing a story featuring Midnight's universe again.
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It has been my experience (over ten years of it) that readers prefer short stories. I say take what you have, polish it and put it out anyway. Be sure to do an introductory piece so that your readers know what universe this is in. And be sure to toss a request to Gryph. If she doesn't answer you (be sure to give her time to do so) then take it as an automatic permission.
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The pic of Rodimus. Although if someone had drawn a pic of Midnight after he was totally trashed by Firefall it would've been that one instead. Hee!
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I'd love for Gryph to re-introduce her stories to the net. I must say, however, that I'd like to see her revise them a bit. I'd not be surprised if she feels she's pretty much over and done with Transformers fandom. Her story is done, so she has that right. If I were done with my fanfiction, I'd probably move into Supernatural.
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Weeelllll she is still writing Transformers. Mind you, it's Michael Bay's universe, but still. I also have ideas for other fandoms as well, but I don't know how to get started. Also, I've noticed that the longer stories ie more than one chapter get more reviews. So, how do I improve? Do you know of any websites free mind that could help me?
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The only way to improve is to write, write and write more. harrass other readers of the same genre to take a gander at your work. If you can keep your chapters short, you can toss them my way. I've been on a reading beinge lately, anyway. 
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Oh man this is super heavey. I can feel what Side's is feeling,nice work with the art!
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ohmigoodness!! Thank you so much! 
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Poor brothers... 
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*points to Illmatar* She gave me her divine permission to do it
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oooohhhh, you are so good in the hurt/comfort department!
Sunny and Sides sat on wall,
Sunny had quite a big fall,
And All of Medbays men,
Couldn't put Sunny together again...
Figured since you like working werid little nursery rhymes into your stories...
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Ah, only if the Autobots had Ratchet with them!! No doubt he could manufacture miracles out of paperclips! Thank you so much for your response ^-^ And your poem is cute; I like mine creepy.
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Oh so sad...well... 
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What I really had in mind was a brightly -lit table with little pieces of Sunny littered across it. But I was too impatient to draw all the little pieces and decided to keep it pretty simple. Coloring something like that would have been a nightmare.
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It sure would have been a nightmare to color!
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!!! *throws a party* Makes me want to write a story of extreme torture to both of those character.
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Nah the Sunny got the beating all the tiem. Damn comics.
I love to see hurt&comfort. Hopefully you wont kill them...
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Sunstreaker always got the beatings in the comics??
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*butts into conversation* Yeah, poory sunny's been "killed"....several times. ^^''
SPOILERS FOR THE COMICS!!
The first time, he was captured by humans and they took him apart while he was still alive/conscious. That was a pretty hard chapter to read...=\ They then turned him into this hub for a whole bunch of Headmaster clones and fuzed his mind/body with this human named Hunter. Sideswipe also abandoned him emotionally around this time. Ratchet was able to put Sunny back together, but Sunny was never really the same again. He held a severe hatred for humans and was very bitter andangry. He never really over came the emotional trauma of his torture and tried to cover up his suffering which turned him into someone that not even Sideswipe really wanted to be around. He eventually betrayed the Autobot to the Decepticons because he was told that only humans would be harmed and he wanted humans to suffer as he had. Well, of course Autobots got hurt and he felt awful about it and eventually came to the decision that he was broken and beyond fixing. He gave his life to stop The Swarm from killing the rest of the Autobots, but he didn't actually die. He's mostly dead in a ditch somewhere reliving scenes from his torture again and again...=\
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Ouch! Psychotic beyond help! I had no idea! You know, I believe in dragging characters through hell-THROUGH hell, you don't LEAVE them there ... unless you really hate them. 
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Yeah, I've been working on it on and off for a rather long time...it ended up changing sooo much from what I had initially planed that I kind of put it on the back burner until I can figure out what to do with it. I know what I want to happen, but not so much how to get there. XDD For me, that's kind of weird; usually I have no idea where my stories are gonna go. XD
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I hope you know that you make puppies cry! T___T
I will have my revenge in my story though! MAWAHAHAAA! ^^
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Am I evil? Cuz if not, I'll have to try harder!
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You're a fellow addict to the drawing of damaged robots... 
It's good. You convey the tension of the moment.
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Thank you! I draw damaged robots according to what goes on in my storyline. Yeah, I don't pull very many punches. It's certainly more interesting than another pretty robot posing with a gun.
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Ah yes, there are so many of those pictures and very few people who would draw damage... It requires too much detail. People are lazy.
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Aye, people are lazy! Seems a solid 85% artwork out there doesn't even come with descent backgrounds!
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YES! Damn! I thought he'd be in more pieces! 
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Now I'm jealous. I'm sorry they're already dead in my timeline. Maybe I should bring them back just so I can see if I can top this. Tall order, obviously but I would love to try!
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Since you seem to be sniffing around for ideas, how about doing a drawing of that scene in which Rodimus slams Op into the wall?
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I have to finish the Omega scene first and it is ticking me off right now. I scribbled a dragon instead as it suits my mood.
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I saw the dragon!!! Some scribble! you put me to shame! I'm almost done with a dragon of my own.
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Dead?? 
Yess pls try to beat this!
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Heh. My series is set after the G1 movie. This is the first time I ever even entertained the notion of working them back in...so I can work them over.
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You, my friend, are a sadist after my own heart! I grovel at your feet and worship the computer you work on!
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MAKE THEM SUFFER! That's the rule...and the only difference between characters I like and characters I don't is that the ones I like suffer Looooonger, because I keep them around.
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In my stead, the characters I dislike usually stay dead.
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