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Mrs-Durden [2010-01-29 20:07:25 +0000 UTC]
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First off I apologize for my bad english, but really wanted to share my interpretation of your beautiful work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>
-The models pose is quite interesting and fits well with the theme and the environment, the colors also add a very nice touch which black and white or brighter colors wouldn't have given to the photography.
-The broken mirrors in my opinion represent her lack of trust and love for herself, a lack of confidence in herself and her life. She sits there finding herself thinking of the hours, the hours that eat her up, the hours that let her think of how hurt she is. It reminds me of that movie "The Hours" with Nicole kidman, Julianne Moore and Meryl Streep ( great movie btw e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/lā¦ " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la - "/> )
The clock has no branches to it, to me it represents the facy that there is no matter in keeping count of the hours, because their impact will remain the same, no matter what time they show.
So I guess that's why I love this piece of art, I was able to imagine an entire story in just a few seconds, and well that's the beauty of it.
Nina.
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V3Nr3VeNG3 [2010-02-18 20:41:27 +0000 UTC]
sempre mille cuoriii
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grickle [2010-01-29 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]
Great piece, noticed that you've requested critique.
I love that you didn't put arms on the clock actually pointing to '11'. I see a lot of work that labors the point to where good meaning becomes bad pun.
I also love that the blue of the corset is also present above the eyes. It establishes good movement. I might take a bit of the blue and put something of a subtle hint in the upper right hand corner. The effect is that the corset and the path of the eyes take one out of the piece to the bottom left. If there were a hint of the same blue in the upper portion of the piece the mind would want to yank around a bit more; and who doesn't want to yank around a bit more.
Also, I think that a little restraint with the fiber texture overlay cold be efficacious- just on the figure really. It flattens the extended legs a bit to have a grid laying straight down on top of them so opaquely.
- hope that is helpful.
gRickle.
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grickle In reply to KopaBill [2010-02-02 20:32:46 +0000 UTC]
I do what I can.
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Spikanard [2010-01-29 19:58:48 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous image. Did you photograph the model?
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Spikanard In reply to KopaBill [2010-01-29 20:06:36 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work. The only thing I would change have changed is your model's shoes. Summer wedges don't go well with the gothic theme. Other than that minor item I am very impressed with your work.
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Spikanard In reply to KopaBill [2010-02-02 00:02:09 +0000 UTC]
Ha! Sometimes you have to shoot with what you've got. It's a great image, full of mood and mystery.
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KopaBill In reply to Spikanard [2010-03-17 20:30:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much :hug.
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Spikanard In reply to KopaBill [2010-03-18 18:30:13 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure.
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