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kordelskin — Self Destruction
Published: 2014-02-22 01:14:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 537; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Watch me burnIn fire so hot
Watch me burn
In what you can't stop
My screams of pain
Fall on deaf ears
You see me strain
With falling tears
Watch me burn
In flames so bright
Watch me burn
In a starless night
Self incineration
As the fire goes higher
My incarnation
of the bird of fire
Watch me burn
Engulfed so wide
Watch me burn
In fiery suicide
Leave behind ashes
After my combustion
But this does not end
My self destruction
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Comments: 25
Thank you for the compliment,and I'm sorry that you can relate to this...
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You're welcome. And yeah, it's not too fun, is it?
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Nope, I hope this feeling subsides for you soon
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I hope I didn't put you in that state of mind. if so I apologize.
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No, it wasn't you. ^^ I was already depressed before reading this.. it was written amazingly btw.
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Well don't be depressed! Be happy, find something that makes you laugh, something different every day, I do and it helps. A lot
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Thank you dearly.. but its quite challenging.
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I understand that, I have been there a lot. But everyday there is something worth smiling about!
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Yeah, but there's also something to worry about as well. Being pessimistic isn't always my thing.. but to think realistically is sometimes the way to go.
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Agreed. But, dwelling on it does no good.
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But I don't dwell as much as I get annoyed.
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Well that changes the situation
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Sometimes we all find ourselves into our dark corner of our life brother. I'm feeling like I'm going back into mine and I do not know why, it's just been going on for a few days.
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This is such a beautiful poem. I wish I had wrote it myself! I seriously got tears to my eyes when I read this. Beautiful.
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This is a surprisingly good piece for how simple it is. I enjoyed it greatly. I think I'll take a look through your poetry, and see what else you have! Keep up the good work.
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Thank you very much Lavitz! Or is it King Albert
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Oh my god, the fact that you knew that name... You are officially awesome. However, it was merely my favorite color, and the fact that I follow a code of honor similar to that of the french Dragoons. However, thank you for knowing who else was a green dragoon.
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Lol I loved that game my friend. Unfortunately I never beat it... My greatest regret...
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I really like it. Remember destruction will lead to repair. You can always rebuild from the ruble.
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