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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-12 23:01:54 +0000 UTC]
No, this wasn't harsh, I have seen some people critique others really really mean and like make fun of their artwork xD Yeah I know, I'm terrible at clothing folds, I can't understand them that well :L And hands too/// And about the breast part hahha I always have a hard time on how big it should be/where to put it xD And I never heard of color theory-- I should look that up >u< And I don't really understand by what you mean by more defined blocks of shading..
Thanks for taking your time and critiquing me ^^ I wasn't expecting you to do it-- but you did xD
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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-13 05:36:37 +0000 UTC]
ehe yeah I've seen some of those, not the nicest things to wake up to nwn
I guess it's all just practise makes perfect : there are plenty of tutorials, step-by-steps and walkthroughs on clothing folds etc. And for hands, just hold your hand out and draw it (as in, the one you don't write with lol). On paper first. And breasts don't tend to come as one rounded rectangular lump. coughthatswhyguysaregreattodrawcough
uh I don't think I really worded the stuff about colour right, but here's a quick walkthrough thing I found a few years ago that got me interested in it (there are plenty of good ones on dA though)
mm well the shading thing is a bit picky because you seem to already have a defined style. What I think I meant was have more parts where the shading is like cell shading, to contrast the airbrush effect.
uh no problem ! <33
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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-14 05:21:02 +0000 UTC]
LOL, that made me laugh when you called the chest a "rectangular lump". Yeah I had tried some tutorials (And using my own hand (Pretty much my whole arm LOL) as a reference) I just have to practice drawing them a billion times xD Ah not for me about the guys, I am awful at the part when it comes to drawing their bodies // That link I think it'll help me a lot (Just from looking through the pictures and not reading the words, I can tell xD) Yeah.. I usually shade the same style for my pictures unless I want to try out something new-- Oh okay.. well I only do that sometimes for the skin and clothes like I first cell shade it and then I use the water/airbrush tool and stuff.. but since you're saying like I barely cell shaded and used too much of the soft shading thingy, I guess I gotta work on my cell shading more xD
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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-14 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]
ah, I'm not saying you don't do enough cell shading or that soft shading is bad
its just that I can see a few blobs which look like cell shading, but they don't really work
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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-15 00:00:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh.. wait then so cell shading is not supposed to go with soft shading? Like they're separate?
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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-15 05:30:44 +0000 UTC]
um it doesn't really matter
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KoreanFroggy In reply to FRIEND711 [2014-09-27 07:43:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol that's actually my signature xD and thank you so much for taking your time critiquing my art, I really appreciated it
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UxieWriter [2014-09-22 19:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Okay so...I"ll just start off with the good stuffs! I really like the colors that you chose for this piece and the lighter lines!!! They go together really well and give off a nice pastely, cute-ish mood! Overall, I really love the way you drew the hair! u_u My favorite part of this piece is definitely the eyes! The way you colored them in is so simple yet truly beautiful! <333 Looking at this, I think you've perfected the art of drawing faces xD The hand on the left could use just a little work, but I can definitely tell you spent a lot of time trying to get it right! ^^ BTW the bows in her hair are super kawaiii!!! >w< And the stripes on her shirt came out really well too! The blending with the shirt is seriously...just really amazing! u_u
And the stuff I think you can improve on...this might just be the lighter lines or something with the program you used or something like that, but if you look really closely, parts of the lines are kinda shaky...and at some parts of them skirt, the seem to overlap in a weird-ish way. I'm not sure if that's the look you were going for, but I just wanted to point that out. The shading is a little harder to explain...On the skirt, the shirt, the blush, and some other parts the shading seems to go together pretty well, but there's also a few parts where either the shading doesn't seem dark enough or you're missing something. Like the swirly part of the lollipop--there's no shading on it .3. There's a few parts of the anatomy I think you can probably work on...Considering the size of the head, the neck should be just a tiny bit wider. The hand on the right looks a little off...xD There's a bunch of hand tutorials you can find that teach you how to draw hands more accurately. The arm on the left is a little longer, but that's probably because you were focused on drawing the hand or something...On the clothes, I can see the curvy stuff xD but her legs kinda don't show it...(sorry I can't explain stuff well...)
Overall, you've done pretty good! ^^ I really look forward to seeing you improve with drawings (especially hands!) That sounds so cheesy xD
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UxieWriter In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-09-27 15:04:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...hehehe...I try to get every detail xD
There's probably a few tutorials on the internet or something...xD
Well, the hair style you chose fits pretty well u__u
I have writer in my name, because before, when I came up with this user name, my life was almost all about writing, but I now have a few other things that matter to me c:
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Lyii-Chii [2014-09-23 22:39:30 +0000 UTC]
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FRIEND711 [2014-09-22 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Love it. :3
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CindyMad [2014-09-22 20:35:38 +0000 UTC]
the eyes <3
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johanSPV [2014-09-22 19:43:12 +0000 UTC]
♥
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