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xian-li [2014-10-12 20:50:56 +0000 UTC]

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Overall I like this piece and it's cuteness, well done !
The anatomy is okay, I would recommend working on improving how you draw hands (I know, it's hella difficult), clothing folds and breasts. You make her eyes look super cool and I love the general colour choices.
Your linework is quite neat, but there are a few bits which are wobbly (on her right arm in particular) so maybe you should use a stabiliser tool or something ? And I do like your soft shading style, but I would definitely recommend looking up some colour theory tutorials and try to add even more 'defined' blocks of shading to contrast the airbrushed look.

Sorry if this is really harsh, but I do like your style and artwork - keep up the good work ! <3

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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-12 23:01:54 +0000 UTC]

No, this wasn't harsh, I have seen some people critique others really really mean and like make fun of their artwork xD Yeah I know, I'm terrible at clothing folds, I can't understand them that well :L And hands too/// And about the breast part hahha I always have a hard time on how big it should be/where to put it xD And I never heard of color theory-- I should look that up >u< And I don't really understand by what you mean by more defined blocks of shading..
Thanks for taking your time and critiquing me ^^ I wasn't expecting you to do it-- but you did xD

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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-13 05:36:37 +0000 UTC]

ehe yeah I've seen some of those, not the nicest things to wake up to nwn
I guess it's all just practise makes perfect : there are plenty of tutorials, step-by-steps and walkthroughs on clothing folds etc. And for hands, just hold your hand out and draw it (as in, the one you don't write with lol). On paper first. And breasts don't tend to come as one rounded rectangular lump. coughthatswhyguysaregreattodrawcough 

uh I don't think I really worded the stuff about colour right, but here's a quick walkthrough thing I found a few years ago that got me interested in it (there are plenty of good ones on dA though)
mm well the shading thing is a bit picky because you seem to already have a defined style. What I think I meant was have more parts where the shading is like cell shading, to contrast the airbrush effect. 

uh no problem ! <33

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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-14 05:21:02 +0000 UTC]

LOL, that made me laugh when you called the chest a "rectangular lump". Yeah I had tried some tutorials (And using my own hand (Pretty much my whole arm LOL) as a reference) I just have to practice drawing them a billion times xD Ah not for me about the guys, I am awful at the part when it comes to drawing their bodies // That link I think it'll help me a lot (Just from looking through the pictures and not reading the words, I can tell xD) Yeah.. I usually shade the same style for my pictures unless I want to try out something new-- Oh okay.. well I only do that sometimes for the skin and clothes like I first cell shade it and then I use the water/airbrush tool and stuff.. but since you're saying like I barely cell shaded and used too much of the soft shading thingy, I guess I gotta work on my cell shading more xD

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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-14 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]

ah, I'm not saying you don't do enough cell shading or that soft shading is bad
its just that I can see a few blobs which look like cell shading, but they don't really work

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KoreanFroggy In reply to xian-li [2014-10-15 00:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh.. wait then so cell shading is not supposed to go with soft shading? Like they're separate?

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xian-li In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-10-15 05:30:44 +0000 UTC]

um it doesn't really matter 

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FRIEND711 [2014-09-22 22:02:00 +0000 UTC]

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This is a very nice art, the simplicity the art and the honesty Of the character is joust breath taking. Also the Korean words on the side dose make a mystery for me ( can't read Korean )if there's anything to complain I guess that would be that there's no background, but besides that, it's a lovely and cute girl here. I like the color coordination as well, her blue eyes the orange shirt and the green lollipop. I would like to know why she' holding it like that but that's another good mystery. It's a lovely art and you all ways make good art, so keep up with the good work.

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KoreanFroggy In reply to FRIEND711 [2014-09-27 07:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Lol that's actually my signature xD and thank you so much for taking your time critiquing my art, I really appreciated it   

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UxieWriter [2014-09-22 19:35:30 +0000 UTC]

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Okay so...I"ll just start off with the good stuffs! I really like the colors that you chose for this piece and the lighter lines!!! They go together really well and give off a nice pastely, cute-ish mood! Overall, I really love the way you drew the hair! u_u My favorite part of this piece is definitely the eyes! The way you colored them in is so simple yet truly beautiful! <333 Looking at this, I think you've perfected the art of drawing faces xD The hand on the left could use just a little work, but I can definitely tell you spent a lot of time trying to get it right! ^^ BTW the bows in her hair are super kawaiii!!! >w< And the stripes on her shirt came out really well too! The blending with the shirt is seriously...just really amazing! u_u

And the stuff I think you can improve on...this might just be the lighter lines or something with the program you used or something like that, but if you look really closely, parts of the lines are kinda shaky...and at some parts of them skirt, the seem to overlap in a weird-ish way. I'm not sure if that's the look you were going for, but I just wanted to point that out. The shading is a little harder to explain...On the skirt, the shirt, the blush, and some other parts the shading seems to go together pretty well, but there's also a few parts where either the shading doesn't seem dark enough or you're missing something. Like the swirly part of the lollipop--there's no shading on it .3. There's a few parts of the anatomy I think you can probably work on...Considering the size of the head, the neck should be just a tiny bit wider. The hand on the right looks a little off...xD There's a bunch of hand tutorials you can find that teach you how to draw hands more accurately. The arm on the left is a little longer, but that's probably because you were focused on drawing the hand or something...On the clothes, I can see the curvy stuff xD but her legs kinda don't show it...(sorry I can't explain stuff well...)

Overall, you've done pretty good! ^^ I really look forward to seeing you improve with drawings (especially hands!) That sounds so cheesy xD

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KoreanFroggy In reply to UxieWriter [2014-09-27 08:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah about the lines, I had to make the art bigger because before, I was using the size of the art to fit on Scratch to have good quality but then I just realized it would be small in dA which was the worst decision I made before making the art :L And about the skirt, I actually don't know how to draw them with the folds thingy.. //>3> I have no idea how people make them so easily.. Like I looked up tutorials on YouTube on how to draw them but DANG they were like drawing a squiggly line and then putting lines to it's parts on top and then putting lines to connect to the squiggly line's insides to look like folds you can see inside :L And yeah I had a VERY hard time shading the lolipop xD I understand what you mean about the clothes being curvy but the legs not showing it, you mean like the top of the legs shading under the skirt has to be curly as well xD And about the hands... LOL I barely tried making them right (Okay but maybe not the one holding the lolipop) but yeah.. I wasn't expecting you to give me THAT much critique xD Thank you so much!! And to tell you the truth, I had a VERY hard time trying to shade the hair because I didn't know what style would fit into it :L I think you should become a writer when you grow up and maybe have art in your books (Even though your username does have the word Writer in it so that was a bit obvious xD) 

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UxieWriter In reply to KoreanFroggy [2014-09-27 15:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...hehehe...I try to get every detail xD
There's probably a few tutorials on the internet or something...xD
Well, the hair style you chose fits pretty well u__u
I have writer in my name, because before, when I came up with this user name, my life was almost all about writing, but I now have a few other things that matter to me c:

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KoreanFroggy In reply to UxieWriter [2014-09-28 06:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Lol but still you would be a good writer one day

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Lyii-Chii [2014-09-23 22:39:30 +0000 UTC]

   

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KoreanFroggy In reply to Lyii-Chii [2014-09-27 07:35:00 +0000 UTC]

 

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FRIEND711 [2014-09-22 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]

 Love it. :3

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KoreanFroggy In reply to FRIEND711 [2014-09-27 07:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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CindyMad [2014-09-22 20:35:38 +0000 UTC]

the eyes <3

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KoreanFroggy In reply to CindyMad [2014-09-27 07:35:51 +0000 UTC]

 

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johanSPV [2014-09-22 19:43:12 +0000 UTC]

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KoreanFroggy In reply to johanSPV [2014-09-27 07:37:28 +0000 UTC]

 

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