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Published: 2010-02-19 11:48:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3394; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 0
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Description Had fun scribbling in Paint Tool Sai lol

For 's Criminal Minds OC contest LOL I just couldn't believe I would actually participate, seeing as I generally don't find OC's interesting.

AH well. HERE'S A NEW MEMBER OF THE BAU TEAM THAT IS NOT YOUR TYPICAL OC THAT FALLS IN LOVE WITH AN EXISTING CHARACTER...OR SOMETHING.
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All the info listed below are according to his CURRENT PASSPORT.

Name: Thomas Hadonif
Gender: male
D.O.B: December 21st
Citizenship: American
Ethnicity: no idea.

Age: 25 (even though to the entire team he looks no older than 20)

Physical appearance:
-An albino.
-Wears white and a single red tie AT ALL TIMES.
-Due to his illness, he has below average eyesight, though for some reason he seems to be coping really well with it.
-Has this annoying habit of twirling his pen.
-Blank emotions, though sometimes he wears this ominous smile on his face for unknown reasons.
-He tries very hard not to stare at people's expressions.

Personality: One day, he was transferred into the BAU, just like that. The team observe that, despite the fact that Thomas is a VERY disciplined, effective, and clever person, he seems to be severely lacking human emotions, or rather, to put it this way, his emotions seem fake and pretended. He never gives opinions unless he is asked to, but when he does it always proves to be extremely useful. He seems to have this unapproachable, almost intimidating air around him that makes the team feel slightly uneasy.

Facts:
-He severely lacks the emotion of fear and is completely unaffected by anything he sees.
-He has very narrow interests.
-Overly blunt and innocently rude.
-He can lie very convincingly and Gideon won't even find out.
-The team doesn't really like him (they really tried though). Hotchner doesn't really give a damn about his weird attitude.
-Reid is constantly (secretly) trying to rival against him.
-Garcia once complained against him for being too eerie.
-Rossi suspects that Thomas suffers from Asperger Syndrom (a form of autism with no learning disabilities).
-Morgan tries the hardest to get him to open up.

Background: According to what he told the team, he was born as an albino in Manhattan. he had loving parents until both of them passed away due to cancer around 10 years ago. He had managed to graduate university at a young age due his gifted intellectual skills, critical thinking skills, plus an IQ of 170. Apparently he has documents to prove these (and Garcia can't seem to find anything suspicious anyways).
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ACTUAL TRUTH:
-His name is not Thomas and "Hadonif" is an anagram.
-He is way younger than 25.
-His passport, license is fake.
-His whole background info is completely made up.
-All of his other documents are fake.
-He forged them all by himself.
-Only his condition is real.

Now that's one screwed up team member. Interesting, isn't it, it doesn't involve love triangles.
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Comments: 20

WonderWolf14 [2015-01-12 12:53:30 +0000 UTC]

He is secretly Prussia from hetalia. Just kidding, although he looks like him

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neko1cat [2014-05-29 20:00:19 +0000 UTC]

ooo what a cutie~ u__u

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SLenDErsUMmeRSevE [2013-12-09 14:25:52 +0000 UTC]

EHRMAHGHERD You should write something to go along with this where he ends up as an UnSub...

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Quincekitty [2012-12-27 19:03:54 +0000 UTC]

tell me more! what is hadonif an anagram for?

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LucyRainbowlover [2012-07-19 03:43:09 +0000 UTC]

...Prussia, Prussia bro' is that you?

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shells210 [2012-07-11 00:23:49 +0000 UTC]

he looks kinda like prussia from hetalia

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asymmetrical-wings [2012-06-27 18:51:44 +0000 UTC]

cool

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KioshikitsuneKun [2011-07-16 00:20:12 +0000 UTC]

he reminds me of prussia from hetalia axis powers good work

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darksidermonents [2011-05-11 19:06:01 +0000 UTC]

he scares me HEHEHHE

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KishinWithAKeyblade [2011-05-06 23:12:22 +0000 UTC]

He looks like the Protagonist from Persona 4...or light yagami...o_0

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hinatagirl2809 [2010-12-30 17:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Awesome OC!

Though I must admit, when I first saw it, the only thing that popped into my mind was "Gilbert?"(Prussia)

from Axis Powers Hetalia

buuuuuuuuuut, it wasn't! I still love him(the OC)! He looks so...spookie!

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Draconicat [2010-09-04 13:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Definitely interesting!

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Disney-May [2010-06-12 09:42:39 +0000 UTC]

I love your description of him! And you know the characters from Criminal Minds so well!

Great job!

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fox2210 [2010-05-05 21:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Love his design, and his smirk.

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Anya893 [2010-03-11 02:33:19 +0000 UTC]

I want to know more! HE sounds extremely sinister yet relatable. I can only think of one other fictional charater that is similair to him (and even then only somewhat similiar).

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koulin In reply to Anya893 [2010-03-11 07:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Really? xD Who?

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Anya893 In reply to koulin [2010-03-15 02:33:20 +0000 UTC]

He reminds me of Hannibal Lecter. Some of their traits are similar.

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koulin In reply to Anya893 [2010-03-15 09:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, doesn't he has something to do with Silent of the Lambs? xD God I wanted to watch that movie so much but never got the chance to do so =_=

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Anya893 In reply to koulin [2010-03-15 12:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes. There is also the book series about him by Thomas Harris.

YouTube it when you get the time, it's such an amazing film.

I believe he was named one of the most horrifying villians of all time.

Your character seems like he would be a fantastic villian as well or a complex protaganist/ anti-hero.

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melissa-chan815 [2010-02-19 22:50:33 +0000 UTC]

wow thats... very interesting love it!

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