Comments: 37
Everest-Blitz [2019-01-31 20:36:16 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I'm from Project Comment!
First off I would like to say that the coloring is very well done, you were able to keep a solid understanding of where your light source is coming from. I would like to say that if you were to blend the colors more a bit in the middle of the face, it would look better. Because with the colors n that area, it looks like it is abruptly stopping even when the areas around it don't do the same thing. The same goes for the jacket nearer towards the neck, maybe if you took a bit more time to blend in those colors so it looked a bit more natural and fits with the other blending. Making shading stopping abruptly can be done, it's just that it should have some kind of consistency with it.
One thing on anatomy is that the breasts look very unnatural and don't look like a normal shape that you would usually see. They seem to be spaced too far apart, and the lines that make up the breast don't seem to be coming from the upper part of the body. It just looks like the breasts are there, the skirt is placed a bit too far down, I would suggest looking at a couple references to draw the breasts and look at where the skirt should be placed.
Another thing is that the mouth does not really match the face. The face is facing more towards the front while the mouth is more of a side view. One thing that could help it is to get rid of the lines that connect the nose and mouth. Although it may not be too correct in terms of animals and such, I believe it might make it look a bit better.
One more thing is that the tail or maybe it's a part of the tutu, is really thin. I would suggest to actually give it some body and not just leave it as a thin line, although this doesn't have to be done, this one thing is just in my opinion.
One last thing is try to clean up your lines a bit more, I can see the remnants of what seems to be a sketch in the top left.
The coloring on the legs are very different from the rest of the coloring on the body, there is a lot more white and it kind of gives off a more cartoony way of shading while the rest of the body is shaded with different gradients and does not have much white. I would suggest trying to look at how you shaded the piece overall and try to stay consistent with that style of shading.
Overall, the piece is quite nice and I hope you can improve more and more as you go! Good luck on your journey through art!
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koulouberi In reply to Everest-Blitz [2019-01-31 20:51:10 +0000 UTC]
thank u so much,your critique is appreciated and about the brests thing i agree everyone has been telling me that lol
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Everest-Blitz In reply to koulouberi [2019-01-31 20:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh I didn't realize, haha sorry! I'm glad you appreciate it, I hope you keep on going far! <3
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adam-ant2 [2019-01-31 01:48:11 +0000 UTC]
Whatever she's saying,
she doesn't look very happy about it.
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koulouberi In reply to adam-ant2 [2019-01-31 09:15:05 +0000 UTC]
Well its a long story,she's supposed to be saying "they're just jealus"in greek.
This drawing was basically inspired by a greek documentary in the 90's about ravers,and its is pure meme material
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HopeDiamond3 [2019-01-30 14:40:06 +0000 UTC]
You’re a mean one, Mrs. Grinch.
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koulouberi In reply to HopeDiamond3 [2019-01-30 15:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Sorry someone already used that joke lol
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HopeDiamond3 In reply to koulouberi [2019-01-30 15:54:46 +0000 UTC]
I hoped someone would put in the rest of the lyrics
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WynautWarrior [2019-01-30 12:28:14 +0000 UTC]
I really like the colors that you used here. However, there are some issues with the anatomy. The breasts are too far apart from each other and the skirt is way too far down the torso. Usually skirts start at the waist.
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BluefeatherGaming [2019-01-30 09:45:42 +0000 UTC]
im really sorry
it looks like grinch
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AlbinoNightmare [2018-11-09 12:00:53 +0000 UTC]
Δεν ειχα ιδεα για αυτο το ντοκιμαντερ 0.0
Η Κατια παντως φαινεται πολύ "I don't give a s*it" χαρακτηρας XD την παω!
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koulouberi In reply to AlbinoNightmare [2018-11-09 12:03:52 +0000 UTC]
στο ινστα την ειχα κανει πιο γλυκια αλλα μαλλον θα την κανω αν το παιζει σκηλρη αλλα να ειναι πολυ γλυκια την πραγματικοτηα
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AlbinoNightmare In reply to koulouberi [2018-11-17 18:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Ουπς, XD την έκρινα λίγο βιαστικά, my bad. (Το insta σου το ανκάλυψα πρόσφατα)
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