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Koutetsu — Trials of the Arcana-cover

Published: 2005-05-20 12:28:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 840; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 67
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Description Heres what the front page of the comic will probably look when I finally get round to printing the thing (Hopefully it will be finished sometime this summmer...i hope) Ignore the studio logo (it a made up logo...not the logo of the ppl who will print/sell it )

Rhys ish mah charrie (c)
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Koutetsu In reply to ??? [2007-03-28 18:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha I hope you will enjoy reading it its a story ive been planning since i was 16.... ive just finished typing chapter 8... hopefully ill put it up on the weekend

I just had a quick read of your story. you are doing well so far and you have some nice ideas there. My only advice is something someone told me to do a while back... you have good conversation and you say where they are... but try to describe the mood a little more.... dont be afraid to add that... it helps to define the characters reactions too. Keep up the good work okay if you ever want me to read anything please send me a link and ill give advice if you want it... though I dont know much lol Crap... i sound so condecsending lol sorry *headslams desk*

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OmnislashVictim In reply to Koutetsu [2007-03-29 05:44:32 +0000 UTC]

lol. Thanx for the advice!
I am always trying to come up with new words to define the characters reactions and expressions instead of 'said' and 'asked' all the time.
But, i'm not that good at thinking of those! But, my friend jade could help...she is a writing critic! she even went to writing camp! instead of doing her english work at school, she writes stories...lol. But, she eventually gets her work done. And i would luv some future advice from u! If u could, can u maybe help me think of some words to use? I've got some later on in my story (around the end of chapter 7 and 8) like:
blurted
yelled
screeched and so on.....but, they aren't all that defining or meaningful.
Your story/comic is great by the way!

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softcenteregg [2005-05-23 02:00:23 +0000 UTC]

YAYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cover art ish fun! I'm doing a friends comic for her shhh...no one's supposed to know. Really nice piccy of Rhys! YAY! *huggles you and Rhys* Tsubasa: "I feel left out"*sniffle *huggles all*

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Koutetsu In reply to softcenteregg [2005-05-23 08:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Yup that it is XD
OMG... thats cool.... dont worry I'm not saying a word XD
Thank you muchly Dun worry.... Basa-chan will be on the third cover XD

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LisaFeary [2005-05-22 00:00:48 +0000 UTC]

thts really good, he really stands out in the cover

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Koutetsu In reply to LisaFeary [2005-05-22 11:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly

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LisaFeary In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-29 00:33:31 +0000 UTC]

ure welcome

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MissyCittyCat [2005-05-21 12:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Cant wait to see what it all will be like!.. *roots*

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Koutetsu In reply to MissyCittyCat [2005-05-22 11:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanketh
Yea...I so gotta get off mah ass and do it XD

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MissyCittyCat In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-22 11:22:21 +0000 UTC]

that is always the way one things, but does one do it?
naw.. mostly not.. but sometimes there are moments..

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Koutetsu In reply to MissyCittyCat [2005-05-22 11:24:18 +0000 UTC]

True... though at the moment I'm still very motivated..I hope the motivatedness lasts even after my assessment XD

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MissyCittyCat In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-22 11:26:18 +0000 UTC]

i think it will actuallym, you seem to be that kind of person all the time..

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Koutetsu In reply to MissyCittyCat [2005-05-22 11:27:34 +0000 UTC]

You think
Well I hope your right haha

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MissyCittyCat In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-22 11:31:02 +0000 UTC]

always so cheerfull and a lot of things planned.. sure it seems a bit panicy sometimes but you seem to get things done when you focus on them.. so yeah i think you will manage it..

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Koutetsu In reply to MissyCittyCat [2005-05-22 11:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha Well I'll try to live up to thoses expectations lol

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MissyCittyCat In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-22 11:41:00 +0000 UTC]

oh i believe you will..

.. oh, just have to tell you..
the dog im getting my puppy off is finally ready to breed.. and a male has been chosen!!!

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naruto-fan1 [2005-05-21 08:30:24 +0000 UTC]

awsome...hi

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naruto-fan1 In reply to naruto-fan1 [2005-05-22 11:16:49 +0000 UTC]

i forot to say man i wish i could color like you

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Koutetsu In reply to naruto-fan1 [2005-05-22 11:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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djSeragaki [2005-05-21 02:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic cover, hard to tell if this was already a existing magazine cover my its sheer awesomesness :B

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Koutetsu In reply to djSeragaki [2005-05-22 11:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Really??? Thank you so much. I didnt think that it looked good enough to be a pro cover I'm happy now XD

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kidokaproject [2005-05-21 02:10:09 +0000 UTC]

lol, dang, but that's one nice logo so u're getting it published?!O_O!?

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Koutetsu In reply to kidokaproject [2005-05-22 11:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Yup I am.... once I finish drawing that issue

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kidokaproject In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-23 04:34:26 +0000 UTC]

wooooooooooooooow O________O!!

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Koutetsu In reply to kidokaproject [2005-05-23 08:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanketh

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MeanPete [2005-05-21 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Thats is awsome, though it might need a little something in the background, maybe.

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Koutetsu In reply to MeanPete [2005-05-22 11:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks pete
I decided to keep the bg very plain cuz I didnt want the cover to be too busy XD

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Ui-Azuma [2005-05-20 20:39:34 +0000 UTC]

no ''THAT'' musta took a long tiem to do O_O fan-bloody-tastic work indeed ^_________________^

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Koutetsu In reply to Ui-Azuma [2005-05-20 20:44:07 +0000 UTC]

About 5 hours XD Thanks

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zaibot [2005-05-20 19:43:22 +0000 UTC]

i like the colors and coloring.. ;D

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Koutetsu In reply to zaibot [2005-05-20 20:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoooo

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zaibot In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-22 17:03:00 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ;D

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Belle-Mort-DUn-Ange [2005-05-20 19:29:22 +0000 UTC]

It is so pretty! You did an awesome job!

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Koutetsu In reply to Belle-Mort-DUn-Ange [2005-05-20 20:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Arigatou kitteh chan

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Belle-Mort-DUn-Ange In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-24 19:23:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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hokuto [2005-05-20 16:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhh, Rhys is so delicious... He'll make a beautiful cover. X3

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Koutetsu In reply to hokuto [2005-05-20 17:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Really ? Thank you

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Raz-Xion [2005-05-20 15:01:12 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMG that looks so friggin badass Kou!

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Koutetsu In reply to Raz-Xion [2005-05-20 16:57:06 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!! Thank yoooo Razzi-chan!!! *glomp*

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aPPlejaZZ [2005-05-20 14:22:02 +0000 UTC]

yay... cover! Can't wait to see it printed, will look awsome.

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Koutetsu In reply to aPPlejaZZ [2005-05-20 17:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha Once this week is over I'm gonna pick up the pace on it so Maybe in a month or two XD.

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aPPlejaZZ In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-20 17:29:42 +0000 UTC]

are you self-publishing?

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Koutetsu In reply to aPPlejaZZ [2005-05-20 17:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Nope.... I'm doing it through sweatdrop The stuio logo in the corner of the pic was a space filler

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aPPlejaZZ In reply to Koutetsu [2005-05-20 17:43:06 +0000 UTC]

yay O_O really? cool!
Would be ace if Sweatdrop ended up as a huge group to push manga style comics forward in Britain.

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Koutetsu In reply to aPPlejaZZ [2005-05-20 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Yup
I know... Heres hoping Tokyopop has a uk version of Rising stars of manga but...I'd prefer to go with sweatdrop Much nicer ppl
Doc had a go at me for not doing the comic yet cuz I was meant to have done it ages ago XD

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noxiousbunny [2005-05-20 13:50:09 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome!

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Koutetsu In reply to noxiousbunny [2005-05-20 16:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Sankyuu

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jagirl2003 [2005-05-20 13:45:22 +0000 UTC]

cover looks awsome! ^_^ beautiful work

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Koutetsu In reply to jagirl2003 [2005-05-20 16:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanketh XD

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Midnight-Wolf [2005-05-20 13:30:07 +0000 UTC]

His eyes are gorgeous and I love the textured look to his hair. The color of his skin is really pretty

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