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Published: 2010-03-22 22:03:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2686; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 1
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I just had a small (3-4 hrs) brake from a job, what i got from it's a lining, and coloring for his short comic
She's Fujisawa Yayoi from Uchuu no stellvia
there are two fave character from that show, one is Yayoi, but i don't tell the other
i'll draw h** too, soon 
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The lines and coloring on this are rather fantastic; both are smooth and very appealing. There are only tiny problems with this.
The way her hands are positioned would not be able to support the weight of a laptop, the hand holding it should have more of the side in it and the typing hand would be arched a little more down than up. With her fingers like that typing would be incredibly hard.
Her ear should be a little bit higher up, not too far but keep in mind about where the ear falls naturally on a human head.
And I have to say this- nothing turns me off more from a fantastic picture or artist than nipples showing for no good reason. I know a lot of people feel the same way, it detracts a lot from the credibility and talent of an artist.
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thank you for the critique
I see what you have on your mind with the hands
I wanted her typing hand to look like, that her lines are already finished, she just want to comfirm everything... you kow, when you just need to press an "ENTER" and you'll change the world 
nipples... there's a good reason... the artist is extra pervy and likes nipples
I'm really glad that you were serious about this critique. this worth a lot more to me than a "WOW, COOL!" or a "UGH, SUX" and I appreciate the time, you take to write your mind out
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You're welcome, it's about my... 43rd critique. XD
If you're going for finished and only needs ot press enter, you'd want her hand to hover a little bit higher over the board then.
It does cut out a large section of people on here that would be potential watchers and fans though, very few women watch artists who do that.
Well, I aim to actually help people improve. XD
[I kinda get pissed off when I see a total ass licking comment, no picture is perfect]
I kinda use it as a way to improve myself as well, since self critique-ing is near impossible.
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you know, i'm not drawing to have watchers or fans... i'm doing this 'cause i like drawing, and i want to give myself in everything i can, be it life, net, drawing, music...
You know, if i did this picture whitout nipples, and i got 1 watcher because of it, this watcher would leave, when i will give myself... so i think it's necessary to be yourself everytime, and your "path" will be straight
and i have a "lot" of girl watchers, and i love them so much 
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I've never gotten not wanting everyone to like your work, it's beneficial both mentally and in a professional sense. It feels good to have people of all sorts enjoy that what comes out of my pencil and I know it'll eventually help me to become a successful animator.
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..há mit mondjak....tökéletes....a színek a kidolgozás..az arc a test...öö..minden (és ciiciiik :--D)
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..az...XD nincs hiba..pöpeces királynős...(ééés ciciiis..:--D)
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mecchi-san what a sexy art u have there...I definitely like it
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Nice work! Stellvia fanart is so rare, even though it's an awesome anime ;_;
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thanx
yes yes, it's a bit sad
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Ez nagyon aranyos lett
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van 1 csomó melltutorial itt DA-n
köszi
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köszi
látom te is le vagy maradva DA-s képek, journalok közt
ma reggel volt 780 képem 
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Pfffff az nem kifejezés..... kb 600 kepem van, most járok 300nál... pedig a klubbokból nem jön, szal beszarás 
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Olyan nincs, max ha nagyon kukacoskodni akarok, akkor talán a keze, de amúgy mindene szép, csak nekem az arca jön be a legjobban.
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Stellvia!My all time favorite anime.But my favorite character is Miss nurse Renge Ren^^
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See lower part of this page.That's her.
[link]
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LOL! i really forgot about her 
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