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Kream-Cheese — Raine Reizo + Rena Concept v1

Published: 2011-07-06 16:21:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1649; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 27
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Description woah woah; how'd you find your way to this old ugly thing??
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Raine Reizo's full concept: [link]
Raine Rena's new concept: [link]

This is the concept art for Raine Reizo (left) and Raine Rena (right), my UTAUs.

Raine Rena's concept here is no longer active (please refer to her new concept)

This is their official outfit - early stage.
and their official colours too... because I keep changing it in past drawings. Use these colours as reference rather than the colours used in a picture for a song.

I drew this on paper first, scanned it, then used the sketch on paper as the line art (lol, I'm lazy), and just coloured on top of it

I'm not sure if I should change their design because it's very unoriginal and is kinda a copy of the Kagamines & Miku combined.

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and I am very UNCREATIVE, so I need HELP!!

If you guys have any suggestions to make their outfit more unique... PLEASE COMMENT!
and if you think I should keep it, please comment as well!

EDIT: I am going to keep Reizo's design, but I think I might give Rena a skirt...
Thanks a lot for your help guys!
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Comments: 15

HiruLoveMamo [2011-07-07 06:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I like they design. but maybe you can Rena by wearing a skirt. So it'll be more suit (my opinions).

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Kream-Cheese In reply to HiruLoveMamo [2011-07-07 14:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for you help ^^ I'm planning to give Rena a skirt, but I'm going to keep Reizo's design!

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HiruLoveMamo In reply to Kream-Cheese [2011-07-08 11:55:49 +0000 UTC]

No prob ^^ Then I'll wait for it, for Rena design

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TheRainbowWerewolf [2011-07-06 21:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever checked out Lolita fashion!? Whenever I can't think of ANYTHING I often check out some really frilly stuff. XD Although, most people won't want to be suffocated with all those frills! They have men's clothes to~! But the style is very girly. LOL

^u^ I like them both so far! And I like that color yellow! Maybe add some random splashes of another color to! Like maybe Purple, I dunno?!
The detached sleeves are a tad bit over done though. I almost gave them to my UTAU, haha. I mean you can keep them though, it's just a suggestion! Maybe instead of short white sleeves, you could just make them long ones, with a cute yellow (or another color) design on them~!

OTL Sorry if I'm not helpful! I'm still actually working on mine, so I need help to!! XD Good Luck!

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Kream-Cheese In reply to TheRainbowWerewolf [2011-07-07 02:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the suggestions! Actually, they're wearing a white shirt/blouse on the inside, and a vest-like thingy on top of it. I always liked that idea so I'm going to try to keep it somehow.

and yes, ik lolita... but I don't want to go for that look XD (mostly because I can't draw frills >__>)

good luck with your UTAU! ^^

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TheRainbowWerewolf In reply to Kream-Cheese [2011-07-07 03:02:49 +0000 UTC]

^u^ D'aww, your welcome! I love helping out~!
LOL I pretty much recommend Lolita to everybody, I draw it all the time! XD

That's awesome, I liked the sleeves how they are to! Just throwing out ideas~

LOL Thanks, I'm working on it right now~!

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yakugamisama [2011-07-06 20:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I think their designs are just fine as they are. c:

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Kream-Cheese In reply to yakugamisama [2011-07-07 02:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your opinion! (:

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yakugamisama In reply to Kream-Cheese [2011-07-07 03:59:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

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Vaniice [2011-07-06 19:51:55 +0000 UTC]

trust me, these are cute! especially since there are utaus out there who look just like miku with different colored hair
i think you should keep it!

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Kream-Cheese In reply to Vaniice [2011-07-07 02:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^^

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Vaniice In reply to Kream-Cheese [2011-07-07 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]

mhm!

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koolit13 [2011-07-06 18:29:00 +0000 UTC]

It's a pretty good start I like the color palette you have so far. And I think their hairstyles look cool too. I am for changing the design to be more original, though... xP For one thing, you could make their outfits look different from each others. Because right now, they kind of have the same outfit, right? ><
Maybe give Rena a skirt? (But not Miku or Rin's skirt xP) and maybe a different shirt type? (Tank-top, tube-top, crop-top are all possibilities ) I don't know if you have anything in mind for personality, but I think a more girly approach would go well with her I think it all would match with her hairstyle
^^ Aha, well that's all the suggestions I have at the moment (I'm a little brain-dead...>< ) Hope it helps, and maybe later I can help you a bit more if you want

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Kream-Cheese In reply to koolit13 [2011-07-07 02:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Being girly would fit Rena's personality! Her outfit does make her seem kinda boyish... I might make it a bit more girly...
but as for Reizo I think I'll keep him the way he is.

Thanks a lot for your suggestions!

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koolit13 In reply to Kream-Cheese [2011-07-07 04:04:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem Hope to see more of them soon!

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