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xlntwtch [2020-01-03 12:11:23 +0000 UTC]
This morning I kept clicking on art by you, eventually got into the "papercraft," and just couldn't pass this one up. I think it's a grand piece. Your choice of materials make this seem very special - and look even better. The way the colors in the background are picked up in the outer frame is good. The very simplicity of the piece is possibly due to hours spent getting it right. (Right?) A small color palette makes what you did both restful and commanding. I've seen many herons and you have it right here, in profile and at rest, perhaps. The reeds are beyond 'simple' and into very clever, the way they break up the solid black. That black sets off both cool and warm colors used very well. It also is seen on the mountains in the distance, giving this depth. I can't find anything I don't like about this - except maybe the size of the email address, though I'm sure that isn't part of the finished product. Even then, I like the "pop" of red. And the overall texture of the rice paper is tops. Are commissions still open after all this time? I know you're still around...hmm...maybe I should try that email.
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KreepingSpawn In reply to xlntwtch [2020-01-15 01:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for your comments, and thoughtful critique.
BTW ^that email is defunct. I can be reached at ThisFava@gmail.com, or HoundOfHavoc@gmail.com. ;]
Or here, but infrequently.
This is one of my all time favourite pieces as well! And I'm wanting to do more of this type of art recently.
I hope I can make the time; and then bother to scan and post them.
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leyghan [2013-11-09 20:03:00 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty cool.
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ForeverYoursMarine [2011-10-03 04:15:07 +0000 UTC]
This is sweet too! I love the details you were able to put into it.
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ForeverYoursMarine In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-10-03 16:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Well, your other work is nice as well, but I would have to agree. These are awesome!!!
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luftenstain [2011-05-01 14:55:56 +0000 UTC]
wow.wow!absolutely beautiful. great design
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folderol [2011-02-04 04:19:31 +0000 UTC]
The translucency of the rice paper fascinates me for this. And I really love that you broke the border with the reeds - it's really well designed.
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-04 06:11:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow that'd be awesome! I know what you mean - designing something so precisely takes a long time for it to come out lookin good!
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-04 19:14:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh I see. That does make it tricky. I'm currently working on a small series of block prints and I'm having the same problem - I find it so difficult to work backwards... Haha I'm gonna hafta start using tracing paper better.
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-05 02:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah so smart! I wish I could do that for carving these blocks!
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KreepingSpawn In reply to folderol [2011-02-05 02:22:03 +0000 UTC]
what kind of 'blocks' do you mean?
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KreepingSpawn In reply to folderol [2011-02-05 05:06:12 +0000 UTC]
ahah! yeah, that would be rather difficult. ;/
hmm... maybe you could use carbon paper?
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-05 05:29:40 +0000 UTC]
You know, I totally forgot about carbon paper. Do you know if the lines erase easily?
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-05 21:51:16 +0000 UTC]
I'll let you know if it works out!
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-09 00:15:23 +0000 UTC]
So I thought of something else that worked for the block prints - cutting the first layer, and then printing it with a dark ink, then using a lightboard to trace the outlines onto another page. I think it worked out pretty well!
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folderol In reply to KreepingSpawn [2011-02-10 03:40:40 +0000 UTC]
When I carve another block I'll try!
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rachaelm5 [2010-10-24 19:38:29 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely nifty! I really like the texture and color that the rice paper brings into the picture.
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