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now, this is a continuationΒ fav.me/d74kogh . now i didn't have plans to continue this, but was then given an idea and chose to go with it and start drawing, so how will krioss get out of this situationand for those that don't know what nomoko is talking about where she is saying 'i let him go once, not again' it is refering to this
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lol, well hopefully i can impress and show off both of our characters being bad assessΒ
and thanks, i figured there would be a Handler (think thats what its called) near by keeping tabs on her, and as you have stated, she might have some freedoms, but she is still and FMP bondage maid ^^ (right now anyways)
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Yes, I agree with the use of a Handler.
BTW, I'd be curious to see if Krioss and company are able to perform their rescue, before Dr. Polecat successfully vaccinates the Ki Jammer.
Normally I'd say she'd take 300 seconds to do the deed, but considering the growing risk to her beloved Bearomir, that time is probably going to drop to 250.
The clock is ticking.
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i thought that might be what was holding her ^^
lol, well i am not sure about the whole rescue, but for what krioss is about to do next, she is going to have to work even faster than that to prevent any damage to her keeper, hopefully you will like what is coming, plus i have a little surprise for you in the design for a knight bear. should be fun
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BTW, you're probably going to have to rescue Kira as well.
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lol, i just read the start of her battle with nomoko, im not sure even krioss could beat nomoko, and kira being a girl i just see her being captured ^^
oh well, should be fun to see, and gives me another drawing idea ^^
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"DYNAMIC ENTRANCE!!!"
Kira comes diving in and kicks them both away, back flipping to the ground between them and Krioss.
"Get up, man! I ain't letting these fools beat you before I do!
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very nice enterance, lets hope it inspires krioss to fight back
"like i need you to tell me this, i have no intentions of losing to these robots"
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Kira simply smirked and drew her swords. "Hey, Crystal! Your real Mistress is here to get you back!"
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krioss looks up at her not impressed, blood still dripping down his impailed shoulder
"not cool kira, not cool"
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Kira looked over her shoulder at him with a grin.
"Aww, don't want your sister choosing the wrong friends?"
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"oh i am so kicking your butt after this, then we will see who has the wrong friends"
looks annoyed as he breaks the sword
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Kira just grinned like a goofball. "Looks like all that training came at the cost of your sense of humor."
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Nomoko takes a moment, and washes the short-haired intruder in a rapid bacchanalia of detailed sensor scans.
The Benefactress decides that this little damsel poses no immediate physical threat against bears already optimized to deal with fire-based attacks, but does have a pretty face. Her petite, shallow figure, is far from the preferable voluptuous curves of a woman like the hotly contested Crystal, but perhaps she would make a good maid for one of the aforementioned bears.
Nomoko seemed to recall that Sir Kirwin was fond of cute loli types, like this Kira, and filed away the information for later use.
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Kira spun around and raised a leg up before pounding it to the ground with a small quake, a ripple of cracking earth racing towards Nomoko.
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The crack in the floor raced toward the Benefactress' elegant boots, and stopped abruptly within an inch of them. Just as abruptly, the crack in the floor reassembled itself, like a giant zipper made of tile and wood, and knitted itself back together!
In moments, it as if nothing had happened to the glistening surface.
The metallic skinned goddess, allowed herself to smile. She was already inputting her observations, and running projections on how passionately this little damsel would struggle, once placed in her inevitable, inescapableΒ bonds.
Perhaps Nomoko would keep Kira for herself.
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While Nomoko fantasizes over her victory, she didn't catch Kira rushing her like a bolt of lightning, the air parting before her to reduce resistance as she aimed a wind-supported sword slash at the metallic woman's midriff.
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Kira suddenly stumbles forward, and crashes unceremoniously into Nomoko; her face mashing into the gynoid's ample bosom. For the merest of seconds, the petite warrior is smothered by the Benefactresses generous charms, before bouncing backward, and landing on her modest rump.
Kira looks up to see Nomoko holding her sword by its blade. She had grabbed it in mid air, and the force of the blade's capture is what caused the little warrior to stop so abruptly.
Nomoko's smile deepens as the blade sags in her grasp, like a wet noodle, and transforms* into a bundle of silvery rope.
Nomoko: "Thank you s much. It's rare that a girl is courteous enough to provide her own bonds."
*Note: Nomoko can alter the physical structure of anything she is in direct physical contact with. That's how she mended the floor.
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Kira's eyes widened in shock, her sword was being toyed with by this woman. Her teeth grit in anger as she rolled away and drew her other sword with an enraged snarl. "You...give her back..."
with a clenched fist around her other sword, Kira's eyes flashed silver as her hair changed the same color. The wind gathered around her as lightning sparked across her body. "GIVE ME BACK MY LITTLE SISTER, YOU BITCH!!!"
(Kira controls six different elements and has a technique that gathers energy for a non-elemental attack, and she just entered what I call Neo-Crystalier: First State, which gives her a generous boost to elemental attacks. If things escalate to her Third State, there may be more collateral damage than it'd be worth to try and catch her.)
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Nomoko casually whips her improvised rope around the blade of Kira's spare sword. Contact made, the new blade also transforms into cords, which snake around, touching other parts of Kira's outfit, and transforming them too.
In moments, Kira is tightly wrapped in multiple cinches finely spun, metal cables, which until moments ago, were her clothes. When her legs are pulled together suddenly, Kira falls to the floor, from which Nomoko spins metallic psuedopods, which manacle and secure the petite warrior flat on her back. A last, flat tentacle smacks Kira on the mouth, and forms an intractable gag.
"Such language. Just because you're cute doesn't mean you get to speak to your mistress out of turn."
Since her clothes were turned into denser materials to bind her, much of Kira's skin is left exposed. The healthy, athletic tone of the petite warriors body is made very apparent to the Benefactress who smiles with undisguised avarice.
"By the way, I liked your hair better, blue."
Being a former evil satellite, Nomoko can walk in space, eavesdrop on conversations from orbital altitudes, and reenter an atmosphere in a bikini. The only person at risk from Kira's outburst was Crystal, which seems counterproductive.
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Kira snarled into the metallic gag as the contact with her swords was still giving her strength. Her will superior than Nomoko's transformative power, her swords straightened out and solidified once more in her hands as her eyes and hair changed again, almost like a golden-eyed Super Saiyan.
With deafening creaks and straining from the metal restraining her, Kira tore free with an enraged roar and launched at Nomoko, her foot swinging around and catching Nomoko in the cheek hard enough to send her spiraling through the wall.
(I'd appreciate it if you didn't treat Kira like some C-list side character, she's plenty strong enough to provide a worthy battle. Her bloodline abilities over elemental energy and the ability to control her swords made of her homeland's crystals strengthen with her willpower. And even without them, she trains her body's physical capabilities to beyond human limit.)
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Nomoko steps up through the rapidly shrinking hole in the wall, leaving one hand on it long enough for it to finish repairing itself.
From orbit, her faithful ship, Leviathan sends an encrypted signal,
"I am monitoring the situation mistress. Can I destroy the planet now?"
The Benefactress rubbed her jaw with her free hand and rolled her eyes.
"That won't be necessary, Levi. Just keep monitoring the situation, while I teach this insolent child a lesson."
Removing her hand from the newly repaired wall, Nomoko snaps her fingers at the nearest Dragonslaver bear. The obedient armored servant quickly rushes to his mistress' side, and hands her an power dampening collar, identical to the one worn by Crystal.
"Be glad that you are cute, damsel. The normal wage for touching my divine presence is death. I think you'll find your sentence much more--pleasant."
Opening the collar with one hand, Nomoko issues a "come hither" signal with her free hand.
Sorry, but Nomoko treats EVERYONE like a side character. She views herself as a goddess, and has the power to back it up. Arrogance comes with the territory.
BTW, the dampening collars turn powers like Kira's into quantum energy, which serves as Leviathan's fuel source. From what you've said here, Kira should be able to fuel Levy for a solid week.
She should avoid wearing it.
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looks like your having fun, i so am going to have to save kira aren't iΒ
*sigh* -_- Β always so busy
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You probably are. Of course you should also worry about saving yourself.
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lol, well from what i have read nomoko is quite mad now, be fun to see where it goes ^^
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Kira narrowed her eyes in anger and motioned a signal of her own with her middle finger.
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Usually the emotions, which resulted from Nomoko's transformation from a floating box with antenna to a shapely gynoid, were pleasurable in nature. For instance, the Benefactress derived much pleasure from her contact with the lovely Crystal.
Unfortunately, Nomoko's burgeoning emotional awareness occasionally assailed her with unpleasant sensations, like the sudden stab of irritation caused by Kira's defiant gesture.
"Of all the insolent..."
Nomoko was beside herself. This flat-chested little waif should fall to her knees in gratitude at the mere prospect of the great Benefactress' attention, and here she was making randy gestures, that were decidedly not invitations.
Nomoko slowly handed the dampening collar back the the bear. The fuzzy robot received the device in two hands lifted up, as if in prayer. Bowing his helmeted head, he spoke with unqualified deference.
"Are you certain you will not be needing this, mistress?"
Nomoko's eyes glowed red, ad she popped her knuckles with a sound like pool balls striking.
"Hold on to it. She'll be begging for it when I'm done."
The next instant the gynoid was gone.
And instant later, she reappeared; inches in front of Kira.
A halo of vapor burst from the gynoid's forehead, as it broke the sound barrier, seconds before making contact with Kira's face.
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Kira's back arched as her head was shoved far back, one leg getting kicked out in front of her as she balanced on one foot with blood trickling down the side of her head.
But her foot soon came back down in a thundering stomp as her head started to push back. "Heh...heheh...that all?"
The two of them were soon standing chest to chest, forehead to forehead. "Nice try, but it'd be pretty pathetic to get one-shorted by a bitch like you."
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As the back of Nomoko's hand met with Kira's right check, there was another transonic halo. This one was accompanied an expanding ring of warped air, representing a raw concussive force, visible to the naked eye. (A naked eye, capable of distiguishing hypersonic motion, that is.)
The perfectly spherical shock wave detonated every piece of glass in the mansion. Every window simultaneously geysered out of its pane, in a oddly peaceful looking, outwardly expanding blizzard of pulverized glass. With significantly less elegance, Kira soared through the front foyer, passing cleanly through a now empty window, and landed roughly, forming in a shallow crater in the manicured front lawn.
Nomoko shook her head ruefully at the ruined glassware all about her, as she sauntered casually out of the remains of the front door. Sir Igoy, the collar-bearing Dragonslaver, stepped dutifully behind the shapely, blue-haired object of his worship, still carrying the dampening device fated for Kira's slender neck.
Sadly, it was still too soon for the collar, as the persistent little fighter, was still in the battle. Nursing her reddened cheek, Kira rose to one knee, and eyed the Benefactress with unqualified hate.
Nomoko waited until she was sure her opponent could hear, placed her hands on her hips, and clicked her tongue.
"Language, my dear. If you don't watch yours, I'll make sure your first ball gag is made of soap!"
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"Tch!" Kira sprang back to her feet and crashed the hilts of her swords together, the crystal blending together and fusing into the hilt of a single double-edged sword as the blades widened into fan-shaped cutters. She held it in a ready position behind her as Nomoko sensed a strange energy starting to gather in her opponent's body. Whatever it was, she couldn't make heads or tails of it other than it was gathering at a threatening rate.
"I told you not to look down on me, and I got the perfect branding rod in my basement to teach you a lesson on modesty as a ponygirl!"
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Nomoko made a theatrical show of yawning as she watched yet another energy build-up, of yet another elemental aura battler.
Β She took a moment to reflect upon all of the other unjustifiably arrogant, young, and young-looking women, who now wore latex maid uniforms, and squirmed upon Leviathan's decks with hapless lasciviousness, bound in inescapably tight ropes, straps, and strict, muffling gags. These once boastful maidens who now have their powers held in check by their obligatory dampening collars, and their cursing voices help in check by the aforementioned gags.
These women, all had to be taught the same lesson of whom their better was.
"You don't have to hide your adorable little build-up, dear heart. I've caught caught dozens of your kind, since Krioss here revealed to me the existence of the new power source you all represent. They all went through the same desperate throes just before they were caught and conquered."
Nomoko snapped her fingers, and started an identical energy build-up between her right thumb and forefinger.
"I suppose the only surprise will be what color your hair changes to, when you reach your critical mass.
I'm sort of hoping for violet. I think it will set off your eyes."
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"Spare me the soap opera, Robo-bitch." Kira cut her off. "I don't give a shit what others you've caught, they're not like me. They don't do what I do, they don't have the same skills I have, the training I've endured. You may think you know what I'm like, but you don't know me at all. You don't know what I'll try next, you don't know how I use my attacks, you're not even completely sure if your glorified talking bicycle in the sky up there can handle my power. All you do know is you don't know, but you just don't want to show it."
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Nomoko kneaded the globule of correscating plasma between her hands like a flashing wad of cookie dough as she spoke.
"Since you'll be muffling through a three-inch diameter sphere of soap soon, please explain something to me while you still enjoy the privilege ofΒ speech. Is there a special academy where petulant children like you are taught the same tired threats? Yours are more foul-mouthed to be certain, but beyond your execrable use of language, there is nothing in your words that I haven't heard many, many, many times.
Clearly, you are the ignorant one, dear heart. Or else you would never have intervened upon this little dinner party. Had you one -percent of my power, you would have crushed armies as I have, conquered worlds as I have, and been worshiped as a goddess-queen, as I am.
You are a lone, skinny, urchin, and you are in over your head.
Savor you last moments of freedom!"
Nomoko opened her hands and let the orb of energy fly forth, like a freed dove. The swift, blue-hot sphere snaked around behind Kira's back, impacting with her own building energy; detonating it!
Nomoko extended her personal screen around the dining containing her Dragonslavers, and her "dinner guests", but the rest of the mansion was blown to ash by the resultant mushroom cloud. Standing before a roof less, open dinning room, in the center of an acre of blackened turf, the Benefactress addressed the mile high pillar of grey smoke, billowing before her.
"You can stop playing possum, dear heart. I know you're in there."
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Kira waited for the dust to settle, her heels dug into the ground and her arms in a strange stance. Stretching across to the other's side of her body in front of her. She seemed completely unhindered by the recent explosion, her levels of power haven't even raised or lowered.
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Nomoko looked upon the tiny girl with the silver hair andΒ the matching eyes, who stood with a unjustifiable serenity amidst the scorched, steaming landscape.
While the Benefactress' eyes remained locked in their contemptuous scowl, her multitude of sensors projected a busy revery of graphs and charts, deep within the recesses of her Brobdingnagian intellect.
Sitting idly in geosynchronous orbit over the battle space,Β Leviathan spied the same telemetry, and noiselessly conversed with his mistress over their wireless link.
"This maidifiable unit doesn't appear to have reached its operational threshold. If you like, I can dispatch her with a guadrillion volt disintegrating lightning strike, if you like."
Nomoko transmitted back, the whole exchange requiring less time that it takes to roll her eyes in annoyance. It was challenging sometimes to remind her pet warship that their objective was to capture, not kill.
"I can't cuddle with a spot on the pavement, Leviathan. Just drain a dozen more Ki battlers, and we'll take it from there."
Inside the bulkheads of the Behemoth class warship, 12 more beautiful former warriors fainted, as their power was leeched through their dampening collars and fed down through Nomoko's "witch's hat" antenna.
Enervated, the bound and maidified captives barely had the strength to moan into their gags, as the Benefactress rose off the ground, her eyes glowing crimson.
Part of Nomoko richly anticipated the prospect of draining Kira's power as well.
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Kira closed her eyes and took a deep breath, her arms setting in motion a strange action. They started to trace a circle in the air before her, each going a full one hundred and eighty degrees before her hands settled right in front of her chest, as if cradling an imaginary ball.
Nomoko immediately sensed it, energy from all over was gathering around Kira. From the ground, the oceans, the warring robots and allies who came together to assist Krioss rescue his sister, Kira was even stealing energy from Leviathan and it's passengers, all of it collecting in that imaginary sphere as the swordswoman whispered:
"Third State Neo-Crystalier..."
The energy entered through her stomach, her whole body aglow with strength. Her swords reacted too, turning into large tendrils of liquid crystal that slithered all across her body. A helmet, chest plate, pauldrons and gauntlets, greaves, and a lengthy greatsword resting on her back. She was now a knight in crystal, and her eyes, opening to show a sky blue radiance, showed nothing but determination and serious confidence.
"Paladin."
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The spectacle of Kira's transformation caught the attention of Nomoko's other bears. Sirs Bearagund, Furromir, and Bearahir left the bruised bodies of Krioss' friend, and stood by Sir Igoy, at the side of their goddess queen.
They drew courage from the unwaveringly confident look worn by their Benefactress. Snapping her fingers with a metallic ring, the quartet of bears surrendered the dampening collars they were carrying to contain Krioss and his crew.
Though her expression betrayed no concern, and she would never reveal it to her subjects, Nomoko was actually impressed by Kira's sudden metamorphosis. It seems, that this unassuming urchin was also adept at power draining, and hence became as mighty as whomever she faced. Since she was facing a goddess, it only stood to reason that she would become so prodigious.
Nomoko closed off her power feed to Leviathan and reset her "witches hat" array to transmit. It had been a long time since her days as a satellite, when she used to beam exawatts of telemetry over billions of interstellar miles, and she had lost much of her ability and range since being mystically transformed into the half woman/half machine she remains to this day. While what she had planned would require 90% of the power she had on hand, that was still a fraction of the energy she once yielded as a metal box.
Moving faster than living eyes could follow, the mighty Benefactress bolted forth, and broadcast a high energy harmonic signal at her opponent. She smiled as she observed that Kira's majestic armor was made of crystal, a substance that bore the name of the woman for which they fought.
It was a good omen. For crystal, ALL CRYSTAL, shatters when hit by harmonics of the right amplitude.
Nomoko had burned through 75% of her power, during her brief approach, due to the density of Kira's special raiment, and the gynoid was only able to shatter a small section of it--the one protecting her neck.
Still as fast as a shot, Nomoko forced the quartet of dampening collars around Kira's slender neck. When they activated, there was a feedback discharge that disintegrated the Benefactress' arms and forearms.
As Nomoko tumbled on the ashen ground, depowered, and without arms to catch her fall, the collars strained under Kira's power. One collar burned away. Another shorted out. The third flickered, and the forth held, glowing like a star. Like a backwards waterfall, Kira's armor and power flowed skyward, into Leviathan's waiting capacitors.
While having destroyed many a world, the mighty ship had never before been called upon to digest the elemental energy of an entire planet. It's capacitors overtaxed, the vessel was forced to bleed off the excess, through the only devices capable of handling that magnitude of power--it's lightning guns.
Aiming at nothing in particular, Leviathan fired simultaneous broadsides from both its gun decks. From the planet's surface, the discharge glowed like a second sun.
When the discharge was spent, the sky faded back to its early evening blue, and the great ship listed through a shaky, ragged orbit; fully half of its gun ports now fused and melted.
Nomoko lay on her side, eying the barely conscious form of the slip of a woman, who now wore two glowing dampening collars. The Benefactress could scarcely celebrate her victory, if this could be called a victory. She could barely move, and at her present power level, it would take her hours to regrow her arms.
But that was not the worst news.
Stepping into view, his fists glowing like blue neon in the fading daylight, was Krioss.
"I'll be taking my sister home now."
Nomoko could only offer one word in protest.
"Shit."
To her side, she heard Kira offer a hoarse, mocking whisper.
"Watch your language, 'bitch'."
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(So...with boss lady out of commission, looks like we win.)
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Pretty much.
I have to admit, Kira's level three transformation really threw me for a loop. I read Kira's move and power chart up and down, and thought I knew what to expect, but the wording on the final move was very confusing to me, and I didn't realize that elemental power was in fact a different form of siphoning.
I thought I could squeak out a victory by exploiting the universal flaw of all things crystalline, and leave it to the bears to mop up, but when I finished writing, I realized that Nomoko's finishing move would mean that with the dampening collars would all be either destroyed or locked upon Kira's neck, and with Nomoko injured, there would be nothing to keep Krioss in check.
I'll have to remember to bring extra collars in the future.
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Indeed, she does draw a small amount of energy from everything around her with the Infinity Technique naturally. But the massive quantity she accumulated was in fact shared with her. That's what the Infinity Technique initially does, let all things share and donate their energy for Kira to mold and use how she pleased. It's hardly ever elemental either, not even light, just...energy, and she uses that energy for non-elemental attacks. That, partnered with Third State's massive tolerance for substantial amounts of energy and the numerous powerful warriors held captive on Leviathan eager to see Nomoko fall made for the Benefactress' mightiest opponent yet.
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Ah. It's sort of like the ending to the original Sailor Moon, where the spirits of the other senshi, after falling in battle, lend their power to Usagi, who uses it to defeat the evil queen.
I could even see some astral form of Kira appearing in the despairing minds of the sexily bound multitudes within Leviathan's bowels, offering them hope, and appealing to them to lend her their strength in the cause of freedom and vengeance.
Hours later, when a reassembled Nomoko steps back on deck with her fuzzy entourage, she would probably rage against their rebellion, boasting how she is still there, and they are still in bondage, but the savvy eyed among the gagged throngs would notice that Crystal, the Benefactress' prize, did not return.
Hmmm, containing Kira would be a challenge. It would seem that she couldn't be exposed to other maids, from whom she could borrow strength. Since she could do the same from nature, keeping her on a planet would run a similar risk. The only way I could see of containing her would be collaring her, binding her, and placing her aboard an emptied out version of one ofΒ Leviathans' sister ships --as the only human occupant!
She'd have a minimal compliment of robots to oversee her, namely lightly powered Handlers with spanking paddles.
A lot of resources for one woman. It's likely the House of Benefactors would vote it down in Nomoko proposed it during a session.
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I always envisioned her using it more as calling out to everyone with an all-reaching voice, like Goku when he prepares a Spirit Bomb in Dragon Ball. But opinions differ, people are free to interpret the method however they wish.
As for isolating her on a lone ship, indeed costly, but there is no greatness to achieve in only taking small steps. If Kira's to be caught, you'd better be willing to spend an entire army on the effort.
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lol, good luck here, hope you come out on top, and not in to tight a bondageΒ
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Kira doesn't go down easily, not to mention she's a being from a completely different dimension and unexplainable abilities. I'd say she's got good odds. Krioss better keep that bear out of the way though, 2-on-1's gonna make things tricky.
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krioss is from a different dimension as well, hasn't taken her long to figure out how to fight him, i wouldn't underestimate her, she is stronger than she looks, kira might be in for becoming her maid ^^
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Oh don't worry, Kira's already taking this very seriously.
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im glad to hear, going to be fun to have to save you to
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Kira will remember that statement when she's rescuing a TG'd Krioss.
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lol, so something for us both to look forward to, unless they are both captured
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Here's hoping that doesn't happen.
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lol, well who will save them if that happens
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