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Kristen-KH โ Time of Dying
Published: 2013-01-27 04:37:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 697; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 2
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tried-failed like all my other arts sigh, i just cant seem to get better...i wish someone could tell me what i'm doing wrong... :/edward elric fullmetal achemist brotherhood.
edit: thanks everyone for the wonderful and helpful comments ^^ i still think this piece needs a lot of improving-but i'll study poses and references hard for future drawings XD
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this is an awesome piece! i really dont see why (or how) you would improve this! but i guess if you want any advice maybe his torso should be a tiny bit shor- er i mean smaller
: SMALLER!?
Me: Yes
*cough cough* but other than that i love this!!! ^^ nice job, love
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hahaha! ^^ thank you-yes i think i made him too tall haha
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: No! I think it's perfect!
-.-
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it rely good better then i could do but his neck looks off but i still love it!
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ah thank you ^^ oh? maybe thats why i think it looks weird haha^^ i've never done this type of head angle-so thanks for letting me know 
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your welcome! ya when i first looked at it he looked like he had a bred
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DUDE! This scene totally made me cry. I really thought Ed would die or something. And what're you talking about? This is pretty AWESOME if you ask me!
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thank you ^ yea-i just wish it took up longer time (seems they rushed it for me) oh really? ^^ thanks but i still need improving haha
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Ha! I laugh at your modesty. Just don't over pressure yourself and things will run smoothly. i know trying the first time i felt like a total failure, but as the saying goes, try, try again!
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I'm having the same trouble. Just experiment with poses and styles. Ultimately it will end up with you having the improved skills you want. Just keep trying.
That looks really good
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ah thanks-yea i should look at more references ^^
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It actually looks very nice! The clothing is moving very nicely, as are all of the joints. If you would like a tip, I would try making the torso only a tiny bit shorter- but other than that, I love how the back arches and he is grimacing in pain. The colors go nicely as well, making it a gorgeous piece of art! It is one of pure genius.
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oh thank you! i see, i thought the torso looked weird too ^^ thanks i'll look out for that next time C:
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No need to thank me. As you requested, I just gave a simple output. =^.^=
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