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Deimos-Remus [2015-07-07 07:10:14 +0000 UTC]
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I'm not really familiar with the fandom or anything related to Five Nights at Freddy's or its imitators, so this'll just be a crit of the art itself.
For such a simple piece, I think developing really nice line-work is a great thing to pursue and will add more variety and character to it, giving it more of an impact. Right now, the lines are looking a bit too uniform and too thick, making it feel on the cramped side. For such a cartoony style, looking at master cartoonists and stylized illustrators will help in developing a confident sense of lineweight and shape by use of studying, researching techniques or doing what is called 'master copies'. I personally recommend Jack Davis, Ron Cobb, Ron Searle, Shane Glines, Ken Anderson and Harvey Kurtzman to start, though there are countless others I can bring to your attention if you'd like.
As far as the coloring goes, I think the shading makes it appear flatter than it ought to, as there doesn't seem to be a consistent light source. To add shade, try using a complimentary color as opposed to the base color+gray/black. It'll help liven up the color, even if it may be meant to appear dreary and dark. Using various shades of purple seem to go well with most any color palette.
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LiamJProductions [2015-07-04 22:09:44 +0000 UTC]
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The overall product is well done, and conveys the eerie cartoon style. The facial expression of the character works fairly well too, I love the jagged teeth and the addition of the gums, the wrinkles are a very nice touch too, the facial expression as a whole contrasts with the simple geometric shaped style of the character, but in a good way. The coloring of the character may be a bit off, as birthday boy blam usually appears to be a pale white, but this might be due to the way the face of the character is shaded. The shading itself is very well done, by the way, although in my opinion, it might get better if the shading was a bit darker for the party hat. other small touches work especially well and catch the eye, such as the veins in character's eyes and wrinkles around the facial area. Overall, this is a very well done piece of fan art.
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TMNTDonniefan [2015-04-27 04:38:35 +0000 UTC]
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It's cartoonish, but also slightly terrifying. It gives me a chill down my spine. The shapes, coloring, shading, and emphasize lines really add to the quality of the picture. The noodle arms make the picture child-like, while the rest gives off the feeling off a nightmare. Compared to the actual game, this is very accurate concerning the character. The shading and expression gives off the creepy feeling suggested by the title. I don't know what else to say, but this looks really good. This picture definitely does the character justice, the creepy little freak. It looks very nice, Kriztian, Good Job!
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krispoopdog [2015-08-26 10:00:59 +0000 UTC]
owwwww GOD!!!!!!!Β
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Enderdragon28 [2015-08-25 21:47:08 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GLOB WHAT DID I JUST SEE
*EVERYONE DROPS THEIR MUFFINS(I THINK ITS A MUFFIN ANYWAY)
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Crazy-Caeshi [2015-07-12 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]
EEEEEEE MAH LIL BLAM
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kanameo [2015-05-28 07:10:40 +0000 UTC]
C'MERE KIDDO
WE'LL GET YOU INTO A FLUMPTY SUIT
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Spagoogi [2015-05-24 13:03:15 +0000 UTC]
My favorite is actually him, only when he is not full of nightmares.
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Spagoogi In reply to Kriztian-Draws [2015-05-25 13:16:14 +0000 UTC]
BBB: what do you mean not full of nightmares.
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SergeantSlime [2015-05-18 19:59:32 +0000 UTC]
For some reason all characters I hate start with B. I hate my BROTHER whos name is BEN. I hate BIG BAND (2 B's) whos real name is BEN. I hate BALLOON BOY (do I need a reason) and BIRTHDAY BOY (BLAM 3 FUCKIN B's)
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fnafgirlbrah [2015-05-15 08:47:24 +0000 UTC]
MAI FAV
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VixenDaFox [2015-05-14 23:43:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm GooglingΒ Eyesaur. I may not come back alive.Β
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VixenDaFox In reply to VixenDaFox [2015-05-14 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]
What there's a Β beaver..?
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VixenDaFox In reply to VixenDaFox [2015-05-14 23:48:53 +0000 UTC]
*Comes back dead* x-x 2spoopy4meΒ
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SuperMarioFan20000 [2015-05-09 16:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice!
My favorite's the Redman
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SuperMarioFan20000 In reply to Kriztian-Draws [2015-05-10 17:12:48 +0000 UTC]
redman is especially interesting in the second game since he is a computer virus that gives you a red screen and terminates you if you don't press cancel
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comicsfordays [2015-05-06 21:57:58 +0000 UTC]
if i saw that id grab a gun and not shoot at him but myself!!
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Munchzig [2015-05-06 05:35:25 +0000 UTC]
"Does this face looks like the face of mercy?!"
btw nice art!
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AwesomeSilver [2015-05-05 00:00:26 +0000 UTC]
Creepy... yet i love it!
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ItsNotMeItsHim [2015-04-29 12:40:39 +0000 UTC]
Birthday Boy Blam is just like
"Follow me to the end of your life"
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Thingamajigs-R-US [2015-04-29 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
FAVORITE CHARACTER
TOP HAT POWERS ACTIVATE
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Kittycake15 [2015-04-28 03:39:21 +0000 UTC]
Don't forget purple swiss cheese BBBΒ Β
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