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Garland48 [2019-10-13 19:16:55 +0000 UTC]
You've got yourself a deal, Nadya.
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Evil-Black-Fox [2019-10-13 07:14:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm really enjoying this story so far. There are a few things I have notice with the wording:
On the 1st line it says "I felt" I'm not sure if this should be "It felt"
On the 2nd line it says "us get picked on" I'm not sure if this should be "us that get picked on"
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KryptonLives In reply to Evil-Black-Fox [2019-10-13 14:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Hey man thanks much I'll look to have those edited soon! thanks again for the heads up
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MrG123456789 [2019-10-12 21:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Glad to see this story updated. Nice to see that not all amazons are mean.
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MasterChiefArby117 [2019-10-12 04:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Itβs nice to finally see one amazon thatβs actually kind to the guys! canβt wait to see how the story continues! Hopefully wonβt take long Haha Β itβs really interesting! Great work!Β
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KryptonLives In reply to MasterChiefArby117 [2019-10-13 14:10:16 +0000 UTC]
Yea I think it was a good move by Openhighhat to add a nice character to change things up a bit!
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MasterChiefArby117 In reply to KryptonLives [2019-10-13 16:50:15 +0000 UTC]
so you and openhighhat both alternate on writing the story? That's pretty cool! Do you know how long the story will be overall? Itβs hard to find a good story of amazon heights and Iβm really intrigued to see how the universe continues to expand! Great work guys!
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MasterChiefArby117 In reply to KryptonLives [2019-10-15 18:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow thatβs so cool! Thank you both for this amazing story (even tho we still got more story to go). Β Itβs hard to find good amazon stories lately and you guys are definitely delivering! Canβt wait for the following images!Β
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MasterChiefArby117 In reply to KryptonLives [2019-10-20 21:03:58 +0000 UTC]
Any ideas on when we can expect the next set of illustrationsfor amazon queen? No rush obv just curious..Β
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Barrowman2012 [2019-10-11 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]
This woman seems smarter and makes better usage of the situation.
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