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Published: 2013-07-21 20:33:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 741; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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My first venture into trying to create a comic. Story is based around the town of Innsmouth by Lovecraft.Created in Manga Studio.
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I love the background and the details. Keep going!
One point, though: at the first panel, her expression is a bit weird... When I first saw it I thought she was smiling, or maybe daydreaming, but when I read the next panel I realized she was sad. Her eyes are sad, but the corners of the mouth go a bit up, I suppose this is why her expression is a bit confusing.
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Thanks for the comments all praise and constructive criticism greatly accepted, I am still a relative novice at the comic artwork
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Oh, sorry, I see what you were doing, ignore my previous comment.
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All comments welcome thanks. This page is a tonal contrast from the heavy b&w intro pages
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Yes, so I notice, now. Keep up the good work...
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I have since updated the work with more detailed line work
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Looks good. I think it might benefit from a bit more tonal variety, though, especially the use of grey to suggest light and shadow rather than local colour.
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