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Description Be sure to keep your mouse over the last frame until you see the "To be continued" text!

Before this was started...
I've always wanted to make a comic, but drawing flat pages repeatedly always seemed so boring, along with of course...a stable story line. I always figured I should make a story line first, then start the comic.
Last Thursday I had the idea to start a flash-based comic and make it more lively and interesting for me to draw (so I don't get bored 8D), but the storyline got in the way again. Then on Sunday I wanted to see if I could even structure a comic in flash...since I'm pretty new at actionscript all together. So I uh...drew some random panels, spent HOURS setting up the coding, and this is the result.
My friends were over Saturday night and again Tuesday night, and they were helping me structure the plot for the comic. It was really interesting to see the story lines we came up with based on these random first panels. I didn't even plan to have text in this first one, but Alyssa came up with some nicefitting lines that also reflect the story. Then Shane came up with the name Eclipse. =}
But seriously, we debated for two hours last night on trying to make sense of the plot. It was CRAZY.

The comic:
OKAY enough boring talk. Each frame should have some simple animations in it, and be sure to keep your mouse over the last frame until you see the "To be continued" text.

The only thing that didn't turn out right was when the comic fades in. I used alpha for the fade in, but one of the panels look way off from the rest since I had that set to Tint and...well, long story short, that was a big mess. I set the fade in to tint on a greenish color that will be the background on the html page when the comic is up, so on deviantart it's going to look funky.
I haven't made the website page for this yet since I want to wait until I have at least 5 pages. That way I know I'll stick to this project and not waist a domain name.

Notes:
The text bubbles are supposed to disappear after a bit so you focus on the animation instead of the white bubble.
The next and prev buttons won't work on here, that's only set there for if I get this on a website. =} I think that's pretty much it.

What Next?
I haven't decided if I want to make this comic 13+ or...older...
The only bad stuff in this could possibly be blood and swear words. I don't like swear words myself and try to avoid them, but one character in this is...well, revolved around his dirty mouth. I mean really bad. xD So if any of these are ever marked for mature content, it's only because he's swearing so much.
You'll find out what's going on in this later. It'll make sense eventually.

Enjoy!
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Comments: 101

BloodStainednight [2008-06-03 02:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh awesome D: i like her mask X) I love the background to, its just stunning. I can't wait until the next page.

QUESTION. I've been looking for flash animation programs..and I was just wondering what flash program you used for this? and maybe if you bought it online, a link if possibly? Thanks.

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IndexMarker [2008-05-24 18:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the comics from neopets yet, yours are WAY better. <3333 The animation and everything. Love EVERYTHING.

But may I ask what program you used for this? @u@

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xdeathpassionx [2008-04-24 10:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Lost for words. It's really cool! I love the way you animated the comic so it actually comes to life...I'm sure you must have put a lot of effort into it. Looking forward to the next part~

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hisako [2008-04-23 05:17:13 +0000 UTC]

ohello skull!

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wonderwhy-ER [2008-04-17 11:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good work. You know what you should add for it to be better. Some kind of progress preview so that we would know how much of animation for current part is left.

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blasted702000 [2008-04-14 20:26:50 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome, This is the first time I have seen a flash? based comic like that, hope to see more

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ShadowOfAlley [2008-04-11 22:31:08 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a really cool idea, to make a comic with a little bit of interactivity in it. It reminds me a bit of the neopets comics but with more, since they don't do camera movements and stuff like the desert dust (I really like that, it adds to the atmosphere, as simple as it may be). I have one tiny critique though...some of your camera pans start and stop abruptly. Very rarely do we see things stop without easing in/out, even with something as artificial as cameras (look at movies).

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ShadowOfAlley In reply to ShadowOfAlley [2008-04-11 22:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, another thing to think about. I was reading something about a study that concluded that people on the internet are very impatient and rarely wait for things, or read large amounts of involved text (especially with the younger crowd who get bored easily). You need to keep this in mind when you're planning out the panel animations, and figure out a way to keep the user's interest for the right amount of time (the last panel is a good example of this). Perhaps like that person said above, to have the pre-rollover image with a different picture/shot than the beginning of the animation, so you're compelled to sit there and see what's going to happen/change.

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guilleum2 [2008-04-06 20:58:08 +0000 UTC]

ANIMATED COMIC! WOOOAH

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VioletVampireVixen [2008-04-06 19:15:43 +0000 UTC]

Omg this looks insanely amazing! I love the animations.

Cant wait for more pages =]

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Reversed-Pocky [2008-04-06 17:40:48 +0000 UTC]

your freakin amazing >:

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Punk-Bunny-Cha [2008-04-06 03:09:02 +0000 UTC]

This is really great it takes a lot of comitment to be able to do a project like this! I can't wait to see the story as it progresses. The only problem is sometimes I don't know if the animation in a panel is over or not. Anyway love it can'[t wait for the next one! n_n

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mttw-artistic1 [2008-04-05 00:00:08 +0000 UTC]

This is seriously amazing!!!

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Emotionless-animal [2008-04-04 17:14:03 +0000 UTC]

ZOMG! THAT IS FRIGGIN AMAZING

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VixieArts [2008-04-04 09:29:14 +0000 UTC]

This is such an amazing idea! And really neat looking too! Cant wait to see more.

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Miss-Silber [2008-04-04 03:01:37 +0000 UTC]

that is the most amazing thing i have seen
its new and origional. I haven't seen an animated comic like this before

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Dipp [2008-04-04 00:33:22 +0000 UTC]

what an amazing idea!

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Mystrivin [2008-04-04 00:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Good idea... I've seen it a couple of times before. As a general comment, I find that I was reluctantly patient to wait for the animation to finish.

As a general suggestion, is it possible for you (after the user moves the mouse over the panel) to display the last 'frame' (so to speak) of the animation? That way, I don't have to roll the mouse over the panel again to see what character, etc. was revealed. Also, after the user rolls over the panel and it shows the last 'frame', the user may want to see that panel again (especially if it was a humorous one) so repeating the animation like you already have is a good idea. Just a lot of extra coding, time, and effort.

I've done a bit of coding for class (just HTML) and it can be frustrating... I don't know about flash, but maybe it's the same, maybe not.

Ah yes, if someone has already suggested this to you, I apologize for not reading the pages and pages of comments. I guess I'm just lazy...

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Kuitsuku In reply to Mystrivin [2008-04-04 00:47:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm a bit confused on what you're suggesting. Is it just that you want to see the end of the animation so you can make sure you saw it all?

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Kurasii In reply to Kuitsuku [2008-04-04 02:54:02 +0000 UTC]

I think they mean that, because on the last frame it takes a moment to see the character, it would be better if when you take your mouse off the panel, it didn't revert back to the begining of the animation? Like, if it just stayed on the picture of the character?

At least, I think that's what they mean xD;

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Mystrivin In reply to Kurasii [2008-04-04 23:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Eh... Sorry for being so confusing. But what Kurasii says is correct.

Actually, I was kind of surprised you replied. Most of the time, it doesn't happen... So I guess I'm trying to say "Thanks for replying". Or something odd like that.

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Khitetsu [2008-04-04 00:07:31 +0000 UTC]

your flashes always run so smooth
you did an amazing job with this
i love panel 3 a lot
your perspectives have such a nice point of view ;A;; <33

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baldmonk [2008-04-03 23:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap... Brilliant idea... If it hasn't been done before, and you want to be a jerk, then you should patent it

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KitsuneShinzui [2008-04-03 22:33:21 +0000 UTC]

absolutley amazing once again! I look up to you so much ^-^

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serinity52 [2008-04-03 21:25:00 +0000 UTC]

VERY nicely done!

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kicahanyou [2008-04-03 20:07:53 +0000 UTC]

cool

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TinaPuaa [2008-04-03 19:55:53 +0000 UTC]

hahah you cheated on the blinking... i think it looks cool though. never thought of that before lol. i think it looks better in a way.

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IceBX [2008-04-03 18:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow 8D Can't wait for the next installments =w=

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KuroStarSunny [2008-04-03 18:28:28 +0000 UTC]

That's such a cool way to do a comic!

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Kamiflor [2008-04-03 17:39:14 +0000 UTC]

I have never seen annything like this before!
It's so cool and awesume! I just can't waith fore more!

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JFoxx3000 [2008-04-03 13:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Thats good

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milyra [2008-04-03 09:15:27 +0000 UTC]

Aaaweesome D:

We all want more! XD

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Khestrel [2008-04-03 06:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Stop being so awesome. Seriously. Stop it. You're making the rest of us look bad.

Khe-

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FlygonTamer [2008-04-03 04:00:54 +0000 UTC]

This is creative! An animated-comic? Ani-mic? ;

I like where this is going! Keep it up!

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EmotionlessBlue [2008-04-03 03:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Omg, so amazing! I love the girl in the last frame, very beautiful. ^^

I can't wait to see more!

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GRAVEWEAVER [2008-04-03 01:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Holy sheepcrackerjacks in heaven
this is beautiful @o@
You make me want to do an animation XD
....ONE DAY

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Miss-Melis [2008-04-03 01:50:46 +0000 UTC]

this is brillant! very creative...can't wait to see more

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PawnAttack [2008-04-03 01:48:49 +0000 UTC]

thats a really interesting way to do comics.

sweet.

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Kikhuana [2008-04-03 01:17:12 +0000 UTC]

You're flash animations are always so clean and detailed!
Amazing job - this looks interesting! >D

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Littlepainthorses [2008-04-03 01:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the detail in this is seriously amazing. With the animated panels and everything. Just. wow.

...plus I love that song, but can't remember where it's from xD

Can't wait for the next page <3

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SitaSonicShamanKing In reply to Littlepainthorses [2008-04-03 04:11:29 +0000 UTC]

< < Song?

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Littlepainthorses In reply to SitaSonicShamanKing [2008-04-03 19:00:11 +0000 UTC]

For me a song was playing with it o-o;

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SitaSonicShamanKing In reply to Littlepainthorses [2008-04-03 20:33:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't hear any song on et. < <
My speakers are on. @.@

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Littlepainthorses In reply to SitaSonicShamanKing [2008-04-03 21:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Maybe my itunes was playing or something x D;; -fail-

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duo2nd [2008-04-03 00:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow! You did great. An interactive Flash comic is a good idea.

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scrii [2008-04-02 23:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, beautiful. Very nice work with putting it together, and the colours/animations are great!

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SitaSonicShamanKing [2008-04-02 23:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Fwafwafwaaa
My fantastic words combined with your artisticness and Shane's title own-age has left everyone in WONDER!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yaaaay. xd' My name is in a Krista journal.

Neopets is gonna be so jealous that you've got a good storyline and they don't. XD

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jasperfox [2008-04-02 23:31:22 +0000 UTC]

now this is what I call a complicated comic. I don't think I would ever have the patience to put this together. Kudos on your patience Ku

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duducaico [2008-04-02 23:22:19 +0000 UTC]

WoW It's cool, I never seen this kind of history before >_>

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Bafa [2008-04-02 22:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Well done!!! You are so so talented! I wanna see what happens next! Way too cool!

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