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Published: 2008-04-24 01:09:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Without you I feel so weak,
I’m too afraid to even speak.
I hear you say that I’m just shy,
But I’m you scared to tell you why.
You think you read me like a book,
But inside I’m stronger than I look.
I look to you, but you don’t know
There’s more of me than I show.
I just wish that you could see
that hidden part of me.
Strength is leaving me. There’s not much time.
Fear increases and I won’t be fine.
I truly know that I’m fading fast.
Can’t you see? I will not last.
You’ve come closer than anyone before,
There’s just something about you I adore.
Please just tell me it will be all right.
You might save me, but that chance is slight.
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Comments: 10

USOtaku013666 [2011-07-07 17:19:55 +0000 UTC]

This made me smile.

Also, I once wrote a violent story for creative writing and they sent me to the guidance counslor to make sure I wasn't planning on killing anyone.

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wolfbarrier [2009-06-10 12:57:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Just what Hinata sounds like. Your Guidence Coucelor is insane thats not even close to the suicidal poems that my friends write! ...:/....wait....D: I HAVE SUICIDAL FRIENDS!!! DX

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kunoichi-kit In reply to wolfbarrier [2009-06-10 23:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you see it the way I wrote it. I know it doesn't sound suicidal (I don't show people the suicidal poetry).It kind of sucks to have suicidal friends. You worry about them but they piss you off cuz they only worry about themselves. ^_^

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wolfbarrier In reply to kunoichi-kit [2009-06-10 23:38:29 +0000 UTC]

I know really! But its okaywhen the suicidal friend takes it as a joke sometimes. Cause I have an openly suicidal friend that I call Jesus(inside joke) and she laughs at the fact that she was suicidal! I don't get her at frigging all. It's good she has a boyfriend so she's not trying any attempts nowadays -_-'

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kunoichi-kit In reply to wolfbarrier [2009-06-12 15:11:45 +0000 UTC]

I personaly am a disturbing individual. I don't really want to die, but when I get bored I think of different ways to kill myself. Like quickest, most painful, and ways that would take people a long time to notice-Like drinking anti-freeze before bed (they'd think I was sleeping in)- Yeah I'm kind of scary.

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wolfbarrier In reply to kunoichi-kit [2009-06-13 11:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Arent we all? xD

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kunoichi-kit In reply to wolfbarrier [2009-06-13 12:26:14 +0000 UTC]

XD Yeah, all in our own special ways ^_^

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LunaTheOtaku [2008-08-15 01:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem. NaruHina forever!!!

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kunoichi-kit In reply to LunaTheOtaku [2008-08-16 23:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LunaTheOtaku In reply to kunoichi-kit [2008-08-17 20:59:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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