Comments: 44
causticsugar In reply to Kurama-Luv [2012-04-21 01:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so here's a critique.
I didn't know this was a male when I first saw it. Yes, there are bishies in Vampire Knight, but there are certain important aspects that help me distinguish gender.
Generally speaking, men have more square jawlines. His jawline is feminine, and softly curved. You should make it more "chiseled".
Men don't have wide curvy hips like women. In this picture, I thought that he was a chick 'cause he has a curve. He may be an "uke" in the relationship or whatever, but those hips are a little too wide in comparison to shoulders.
Generally speaking, a woman's shape is kinda like a rectangle, where the hips are as wide as the shoulders, or wider. While for males, they are more likely an inverted triangle, where the hips are always smaller than the shoulders.
The wrists must be aligned with the crotch, and they're a little too small. Same thing with the feet. The hands should cover half of your face horizontally (from left to right), and cover from the chin to a little more than the eyebrow vertically (up and down).
Even as I write this, I know you are drawing in an anime style, so a few things you don't have to take to heart. But you should consider them, as 'v'-shaped chins don't look visually appealing when you have the right thickness of neck (such as in the headshot you drew).
And.. that's it for the anatomy.
The coloring is amazing. The lighting and shadow is brilliant, and overall leaves a very nice soft-shaded effect. I love it! The texture and wrinkles in the clothes... I'm so jelly xD
The eyes at the left are intriguing too. Keep it up!
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jijikero [2012-03-20 14:27:46 +0000 UTC]
beautiful OC! I love the colors you chose, nice outfit, and great hair/eyes!
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WatchKeepers [2012-03-19 02:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Watch out, we got a badass over here!
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Kurama-Luv In reply to Vampire-KnightRP [2012-03-19 03:41:25 +0000 UTC]
thanks its for when he uses his powers and they aren't tattoos they're scars
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Kurama-Luv In reply to Vampire-KnightRP [2012-03-19 14:19:56 +0000 UTC]
H is says so in the appearance: thingie! Te senators been doin stuff so ... Yeah
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DeathlyBeauty [2012-03-19 00:16:56 +0000 UTC]
This guy seems like a really nice but badass dude!
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Sacora1020 [2012-03-19 00:05:50 +0000 UTC]
he looks soooo coool XD
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Sacora1020 In reply to Kurama-Luv [2012-03-19 00:11:23 +0000 UTC]
chat :3 Sacora: -twinkly eyes- pwees Zero-kun
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Kurama-Luv In reply to Sacora1020 [2012-03-19 00:14:42 +0000 UTC]
Zero: *sigh* alright Bunny *pats head*
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Kurama-Luv In reply to Sacora1020 [2012-03-19 00:20:47 +0000 UTC]
Zero:heh cute little bunny now aren't we?
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Sacora1020 In reply to Kurama-Luv [2012-03-19 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]
Sacora: -smiles- I always am ((Meh: i was wondering if chu could make a reference sheet for Sacora like you did for Orochi pweeze))
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Sacora1020 In reply to Kurama-Luv [2012-03-19 00:34:09 +0000 UTC]
yay thankies ^^ -glomps chu- ^^
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