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Kurogashi — Yui Kotegawa
Published: 2013-03-27 22:43:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1596; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 15
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More Yui loveliness! Just practicing anatomy.
I wish I had more space, I wanted to draw the wedding dress version.
3/27/13
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Clavicle looks really awkward... Also, the "upper" part of the back (above the midpoint if you get what I'm saying) is a tad bit too misplaced... Lessen the slope a bit and I think it'd look better. By the way, do you use references for all of your drawings? Or do you start from scratch with guidelines and whatnot?
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Most with references, a few without.
Indeed the clavicle does look kind of weird but I think it's because of the angle (it's how the artist did it anyway), whether it's realistic or not is a different story. Yeah, a decrease in the slope in combination with a slightly linear line would've made the back look better -- at least according to the original drawing. But then again, now that I look at it, this drawing isn't very accurate at all.
Thanks for the feedback though!
Reference: [link]
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I can see what you mean about the clavicle though.It is just a bit inaccurate. And no problem for the feedback~! It's my pleasure ^ ^
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