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Yagamiseven [2012-02-23 22:33:59 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors in this

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davekatkind [2011-10-18 03:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeh~<3
She looks so pretty~! And I love her clothes > ヮ <

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Twinlet [2011-10-17 00:28:40 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty

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ashenblue [2011-10-02 17:13:29 +0000 UTC]

I think it's that her thighs are too short... the tips of her fingers would reach way past the middles of her thighs, which is ideally where they're supposed to be, if her arms went straight against her sides. A little more definition between the thighs and calves would also be good - same thing goes for her arms. Maybe drawing in kneecaps and elbows would help? And there's also a sore lack of not only body fat, but also muscle - at the moment her legs look like they're only made of bones and the slightest layer of muscle, making them much too straight. There's a stigma around the word 'fat' that makes a lot of people try to avoid it when drawing, but it helps to make characters more realistic. She doesn't have to be overweight, but adding at least a little bit would make her legs look better. Her thighs should be more rounded, while there should be a sort of round bulge at the top of her calf, at the back and under the inside of her knee, that thins out towards the middle of the calf and becomes more slender to connect with the ankle.

However, I realize from what you said on her application form that you can't change this drawing, so instead, please keep what I said in mind for your next piece of art. Otherwise, I think she looks very cute - you have a talent for designing characters that make me wanna squee at how adorable they are. x3 Nice work!

Also, my apologies for how long this comment turned out to be; I have trouble curbing my long-winded tendencies while writing. ;; Most people skip some parts of what I say as a result, but oh well.

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RougeChocobo [2011-10-02 15:47:09 +0000 UTC]

oOo This is beautiful~! OvO <3

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