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kuso-taisa — Sweet pool- the RED road
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Published: 2009-11-03 16:16:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1986; Favourites: 101; Downloads: 0
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FInished >< another failure~~~I'm bad at coloring....ORZ
Thanks for watching my streaming~~I hope can do better next time, and with better video quality...
SP by Nitro + Chiral
Art by me
the red road
All the ways I know are beautiful
Dreaming of my ghost
I walking down the red road
How long, I'll never know
Brush away the memories
Lighting up the hollow of the hand
It's my way
I'll waiting for this moment
Close my eyes and say "No forever"
I'll eat out my heart, So beautiful
Dreaming of my ghost
I walking down the red road
Brush away the memories
Lighting up the hollow of the hand
It's my way
I'll waiting for this moment
Close my eyes and say, "No forever"
I'll eat out my heart, So beautiful
Dreaming of my ghost
I walking down the red road
Good-bye my soul
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Comments: 23
aww, good job in the higanbana *_*
I like the colouring style, too bad you are disappointed with yourself .-.
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haha thank you!!! My coloring need to improve ><
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but it is very cool atm *:*
I'm curious on your further improvement =3
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Ok, here goes me embrassing myself.
My Critique of this pic. I don't have a pay account so I can't post up there.
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When I first lay my eyes on this piece, I feel a warmth. It is due to the use of the red color - very nice (my fav. color). I haven't see many people make good use of it.
The placement of the two characters is not a fresh idea but it works for the purpose of this piece. They both are looking toward the flower that one of them is holding. The flower must mean something. Sorry I don't know its name and meaning but I will give it a guess that it's about something bad. Please, notice that they are not smiling (but their expressions are questionable).
It does not seem to has a specific light source. If there is, it would be coming from the viewers direction. This is the part that confuses me because their noses are highlighted with white. If the light source is coming from the flower then why isn't it a bit red? Now, don't go crazy. There is a saying that goes like 'it just looks good'. It does look good. Isn't it?
As for the background, there is not much, just a regular brush of red gradients (red family colors). It keeps our focus on the two characters looking at the flower.
Overall, I like this drawing despite the original characters are from a +18 game that I will never play - no money and too scared.
Anyway, I would like to know the meaning of the flower. Anybody?
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Thank you for your critique!! I really need it to improve!!
as you saw, the lighting is very random, I myself didn't get enough reference for the lighting ><
the flower is higanbana/red spider lily, aka flower from hell ^^" It represent those two charas' "child" that appear later in the game hehe~
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I see the meaning of the flower.
Now, I think about it the lighting in manga usually is like that (if I am not wrong). Too much would be in the realistic area.
thanks.
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LOL Your description- that's a very bad spoiler lol
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The red contrasts a lot with the characters, overall very daring and it gives of a really cool effect~
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I watched you do the coloring! I think it's actually really beautiful ^_^
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Thank you!! I've downloaded procaster so everyone can watch in good quality next time XD
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You're welcome! 
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ooooh, me likey, but i missed your livestreaming.
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I'll do again tomorrow~ maybe ^^
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