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YOSHI-day [2016-11-25 17:31:19 +0000 UTC]

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Hi again here's my critique:
1. I'm not a LOL player but based on what I saw she appears to be more lively than to what you're showing now. If you were trying to make her look more leader looking then you kind of did. But if that wasn't your goal then this Lux doesn't look like Lux.
2. The fact that you drawn just her face leaves not much impact.
I only did the main flaws but everything else seems fine. My final score: 8.1/10
I honestly don't know how to help you with things such as art painting because I only draw, sorry. I hope you found this useful somehow and keep improving.

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PattyKlauck In reply to YOSHI-day [2016-12-05 00:40:14 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to disagree with the "lively" part. Lux's happiness and bright smiles are most likely fake. As she herself has said in her Judgment, she "has nothing else" but the League of Legends. She was forcibly dragged out of her home by her own parents at a very young age in order to join the military. Even though she is brilliant, she was forced to do something she didn't want to (right after her older brother left to the League, by the way) - even worse: love and fight for a country which basically made her suffer indirectly - and then probably lived all alone until she joined the League. So yeah, that seems pretty cold to me xD

(by the way, I'm sorry for the bad english, it's not my main language!)   

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YOSHI-day In reply to PattyKlauck [2016-12-09 01:18:17 +0000 UTC]

well I never played LOL and I definitely did know of her background but I searched some of her pictures and the one I saw was her smiling. Sorry for the lack of knowledge. and np problem with your english.

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Kveather In reply to YOSHI-day [2016-11-25 18:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Btw, I took your advice about the blood in the Guts illustration and improved it a bit

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YOSHI-day In reply to Kveather [2016-12-09 01:19:20 +0000 UTC]

I saw your new art it looks amazing!

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Kveather In reply to YOSHI-day [2016-12-10 00:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my friend!

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YOSHI-day In reply to Kveather [2016-12-10 00:29:40 +0000 UTC]

np

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Kveather In reply to YOSHI-day [2016-11-25 18:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, friend! I really appreciate your opinion and will take it on count for my future illustrations

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YOSHI-day In reply to Kveather [2016-11-25 23:15:20 +0000 UTC]

np I'm glad I could help

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MartyRossArts [2016-12-14 20:28:35 +0000 UTC]

super ultra nice

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Kveather In reply to MartyRossArts [2016-12-15 21:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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IrisAnimae [2016-11-27 17:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Coool

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Kveather In reply to IrisAnimae [2016-11-28 23:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DefinitelyNotScott [2016-11-27 03:12:26 +0000 UTC]

What cute freckles!

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Kveather In reply to DefinitelyNotScott [2016-11-27 04:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Brave-Shine [2016-11-26 03:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Te quedo realmente preciosa, gran trabajo!

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Kveather In reply to Brave-Shine [2016-11-26 04:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias!

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Brave-Shine In reply to Kveather [2016-11-26 05:06:56 +0000 UTC]

De nada (:

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TheTubich [2016-11-25 09:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Kveather In reply to TheTubich [2016-11-25 16:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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TheTubich In reply to Kveather [2016-11-25 21:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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