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kwhitepearl — Event 7: A Timely Letter (Past) Page 2

Published: 2012-12-19 23:11:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1194; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 16
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Description Alex sighs as he looks around. There were so many unfamiliar faces around that he felt a little embarrass to ask someone for help. After a couple of minutes of walking around, Alex decides to go back inside the small house where they handed him the sheet of paper. As he walks in he notices Renegade, a shiny Mightyena he had made friends with back in Tao. Being happy that he found someone he knew, Alex dashes to him to see if he can help. “Hey Ren, boy am I glad to find you.” Said Alex while wagging he’s tail a little. Ren then turns and notices the small poochyena. “Hey Alex, guess you’re stuck here in the past also uhm.” “Yeah” said Alex while having both he’s ear’s lower. “Don’t worry” said Ren as he pats Alex on the back. “As soon as we get what the fairy needs and heal her up we can go home to our partners. But first we need to write our letters.” Alex then shows a sheet of paper to Ren. “Oh yeah, I almost forgot to ask, I was wondering if you can help me write one.” Alex a little embarrass, scratches his head. “Uhmm see I don’t really know how to write well, soo..uhm can you help.” Ren then looks up then scratches his cheek a little. “uhmm I really wish I can help but uhmm….I…..don’t know how to write either.” Said Ren a little embarrass also. “But don’t worry I know this Merchant who help me a little with my letter. Her name’s Amy and I’ll bet she wouldn’t mind helping you if you want.” Ren then holds Alex and turns him around and points to a Dewott. “You see that dewott over there with a Beautifly looking scarf, she’s Amy. So why don’t you go and ask her.” Ren then pushes Alex a little. “I’ll be over here if anything.” Alex a little confuse, walks up to the dewott. “uhmm excuse .. Me, I was wondering if you can help me write a letter to my partner. See I don’t know how to write well” Amy had a small worry look on her face but then smiles as soon as she heard the small poochyena. “Sure, seems like there’s a couple of mon’s here who don’t know how to write well also, So I don’t mind.” Alex happy to hear this smiles. “Thank you very much. Hope this isn’t too much trouble.” Amy smiles “It isn’t any trouble at all. Besides, I already finish writing my letter. So you know what you want to write to your partner.” “I have something in mind but please don't laugh.” Said Alex a little embarrass. “I wouldn’t dare laugh” Said Amy with a serious look on her face. “These letters are too important to be laugh at. Now shall we begin?” Said Amy with a smile. Alex smiles and nods. “yeah”
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With the way I write I think I need to back to school =__=;
Any way here's another page, hope Renegade and Amy aren't too out of character, I'm just not very good at this.
I was going to write something with Thomas in it after drawing him but for some reason couldn't think of anything so hope it's ok if he's just there to fill the picture. >w<
I also just realize I don't know how to draw Dewott too well. @___@;

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Comments: 12

TheBestNameUEverSeen [2012-12-20 23:59:27 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think the writing was bad~
I liked the content of it at least eue
But if you feel bad about if, it's just like with art, practice makes perfect and all that

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kwhitepearl In reply to TheBestNameUEverSeen [2012-12-23 01:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yeah I guess your right. ^^
I'm glad it isn't bad.

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TheBestNameUEverSeen In reply to kwhitepearl [2012-12-23 06:45:09 +0000 UTC]

aha, yeah, it definitely isn't! but it's good that you're critical about it, because that means you'll improve even more! x3
the art of course is great

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kwhitepearl In reply to TheBestNameUEverSeen [2012-12-24 04:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks. ^^

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TwiliShewolf [2012-12-20 00:50:48 +0000 UTC]

D'oh, that was cute of you to include Renegade in here!
I think he's pretty in-character
I don't think your writing was to bad either; I'd just recommend splitting it into paragraphs for starters. To make it easier to read, you know?

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kwhitepearl In reply to TwiliShewolf [2012-12-20 20:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha I'm glad and no problem. ^^
Ah, I know what you mean know, thanks for telling me.

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TwiliShewolf In reply to kwhitepearl [2012-12-20 20:12:57 +0000 UTC]

It's no prob, glad to help ^^

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ClefdeSoll [2012-12-19 23:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Look at Thomas being all pissed in the bg LOL <3

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kwhitepearl In reply to ClefdeSoll [2012-12-20 20:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Why wouldn't he be, all the girls in the past are to either too sad or are acting too serious to be hit on by him lol. x'D

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ClefdeSoll In reply to kwhitepearl [2012-12-21 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]

oh he doesn't really care on how his hitting on is welcomed LOL (Thomas is full of dark secrets man)

I can totally imagine him fussing about anything really maybe hes tired of flying. x'DDDD also he cant read/write

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kwhitepearl In reply to ClefdeSoll [2012-12-24 05:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Phhff. x'D
lol, for a bird Thomas seems lazy. At lest that's something they both have in common, though I bet they'll just insult each other about it. :'D

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ClefdeSoll In reply to kwhitepearl [2012-12-24 22:41:16 +0000 UTC]

he's not exactly lazy; his left wing is missing a few feathers, so it's a little more demanding for him to fly. Well yes ok he is also lazy. Also he would never talk about that scar thing because he doesn't want to sound or look weak for even a second AND HEY BATTLE SCARS ARE MANLY.

and yes but dont insults show love at times? :'D

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