Comments: 38
pumsmajer [2012-09-27 07:47:39 +0000 UTC]
super!
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NAO1203 [2012-09-20 10:53:49 +0000 UTC]
Nice work
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Mister-Ace [2012-09-20 02:56:05 +0000 UTC]
pretty good line work. I like it.
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CRAZED20 [2012-09-19 23:28:03 +0000 UTC]
I think you were mainly successful with his face, hand, and cape. These are where the inking styles were employed best, and definitely create a bold look. My main gripe is his shoulders. I know the new Supes isn't necessarily going the broad shouldered triangular shaped look he's usually had, but his right shoulder here is oddly small, and his arm and elbow look very flat. His other arm looks very stiff at his side as well, I've never seen arms dropped so rigidly, with no bend at the elbow unless deliberate. His torso too also looks a bit slanted towards the left. Also, his hair would much better fit your style here if it had more shape then it does here, more of a clear outline.
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KwongBee-Arts In reply to CRAZED20 [2012-09-20 00:12:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you for imput the funny thing is some of the things you liked best i inventive such as the cape. i directly referenced this pose from a photo of a real man so those things you don't like is exactly how he was positioned heh
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CRAZED20 In reply to KwongBee-Arts [2012-09-20 00:30:04 +0000 UTC]
Well then the photo must have been angled. Seriously, just because you used a reference doesn't mean it gave you 100% accuracy. If people had this ability, everyone would be a master artist from the get go. You are not I Robot, you are not a scanner, or a camera yourself. What you put down on the paper will not 100% match your photo reference.
Why in the world must you negate every piece of advice I give you out of spite? If you must do that, then stop posting your work in my threads. I will always do my best to give constructive criticism. If you don't want it, stay away.
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KwongBee-Arts In reply to CRAZED20 [2012-09-20 00:34:31 +0000 UTC]
no no i apreciate the advice i guess i shouldn't answer these when i'm sleepy an tired. you gave me some good things to work on thank you again sorry if i sounded harsh
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ArtofPrincessM [2012-09-19 22:22:14 +0000 UTC]
this is very well done! I feel like you combined similar styles of traditional comics but made it your own style.
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Nur8 [2012-09-19 19:56:19 +0000 UTC]
Woah!amazing.
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Daggeo [2012-09-19 18:15:14 +0000 UTC]
Let's fly, let's fly away!
Well done, good, precise technique.
You Superman looks a bit young, but the invite is tempting!
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ady20079 [2012-09-19 15:00:26 +0000 UTC]
I think your new techniques are very good. I like this drawing very much, the lines, the shading are very good and precise, a clean work, also it looks very good. Congrats!
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Aloubell [2012-09-19 08:40:29 +0000 UTC]
OMIGOSH!!! THE DETAILS ARE AMAZING!! Super awesome ^^
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tayleaf [2012-09-19 03:51:34 +0000 UTC]
Nice sharp lines!
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RoamingDragon [2012-09-18 20:35:05 +0000 UTC]
Nice work on the man of steel! Great on the hair, his shading, and his face.
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DonEmidioNavarroArts [2012-09-18 13:57:55 +0000 UTC]
Great lines. the shadding is very well done. The perspective looks good too. I like his face, and the dual expression on it. Great work.
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nahp75 [2012-09-18 08:59:06 +0000 UTC]
Good job, I like the way you use to shade.
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kaze-fox [2012-09-18 04:01:55 +0000 UTC]
oh wow! you improved so much from the last time i saw your work. pat yourself on the back if no one else can. i think eventually ill go to a con
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jsnatal01 [2012-09-18 01:10:09 +0000 UTC]
WOW...GREAT INVITATION FOR A LUCKY PERSON.
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ArminOzdic [2012-09-17 23:31:25 +0000 UTC]
Nice work!I think you might overdone it tho,especially abs and cape,some of shadows on cape isnt logic to me.
The head and hand are very nice.
Hope you don't mind critique here.
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KwongBee-Arts In reply to ArminOzdic [2012-09-17 23:37:18 +0000 UTC]
wel i really drew this piece to be colored i think the colors will help make this look much better when its done
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roamingtigress [2012-09-17 21:59:46 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant work on the detail of the lineart! I love the pose as well.
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rubenom [2012-09-17 21:06:21 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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KwongBee-Arts In reply to rubenom [2012-09-17 21:17:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks my friend i really enjoy your work as well
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N0XI0US--GLiTCH [2012-09-17 19:52:52 +0000 UTC]
rather sexy, actually ; u ;
nice shading skills ; v ;
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BS--Comics [2012-09-17 19:48:58 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work here. I love the pose and shading especially! I'm enjoying the New 52 and the Superman family is my main read right now XD
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KwongBee-Arts In reply to BS--Comics [2012-09-17 19:51:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much bud can always count on you for a good comment wait till u see it colored
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BS--Comics In reply to KwongBee-Arts [2012-09-17 19:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Definitely looking forward to seeing it!
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