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Published: 2010-06-30 01:49:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1680; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 43
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PLEASE CRITQUE owoSo I fixed some stuff form the first one and I want some more critique maybe...otherwise I'm gonna stick with this ^^ I'm gonna add different hair and tails and stuff. So there's like a long tail and a short tail and etc... Not as nice as like, Blue-Kiba and nequita and Lunatemari's stuff, but I'm pretty proud of it >//////<
PLEASE DON'T USE AS LINEART YET!!!! UPLOADING BETTER ONES IN A FEW DAYS owo
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This is awesome! ^^ I'd love to see the final one! 
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Ok C: just gotta finish those puppy litters.....
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That's really good : O I just don't really get the left back leg. It reminds me of baggy pants (lolwut?)
yeah ouo but it's really awesome so far.
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I've been looking at the back leg trying to figure out whats wrong with it and idk ;A; Why does it remind you of....uuuuuhh baggy pants?
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i feel like the thigh drops too low or something but i can't draw wolves so my critique srsly doesn't help orz
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yah....riquira-shina thought it was too long too o3o
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LJDFHSNMDHFMGSX,SNZ gaaaaaah, I'm trying to fix the front leg ;A; now I have to try to fix the back too D: D: D: riquira-shina thinks it's funny looking too, but I dun know how to fixxxxx it D:
and thanks c:
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I have been and it's not helping o3o idk whyyyy D: those two legs hate meeeee D: D: D:
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Yuh, it does X3 just gotta mess with it a lot D:
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Wow its almost done the only thing that I can really say that stands out really is the front leg the one thats reaching out it looks awkward as if it dosen't quite belong their . ^_^ The other feet look amazing great job on them ^_____________^
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SO its just the front leg? is the paw okay? or should I try redoing the whole front leg?
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Yes just the front leg, I don't know if you change the whole leg they you may have to change the whole front paw. X3 as I said it just looks very awkward. ^_^
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okay :3 what about the back left leg? My other friend thought it looked odd...
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Hmmm the back leg looks fine but the part before the leg streches down looks rather large. ^_^ X3 I don't know if that helps any
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Heheh, I just fixed the front one and decided it looked fine c: I'm cleaning it up now and should have it in by monday or tuesday (hopefully)
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^^ i actually like this! I mean i'm still not a big fan of scene wolves but this is really nice lineart. A couple things I did notice if you want the critique, the front right leg and the lower part of the left back leg look a little... off. like on the back leg maybe you made the upper part too long? idk. anyway other than those little things it looks really good ^^
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Thankyou~~~~ lol I have other ones that you dun like in my phtoshop waiting to be finished X3 Like one with a long draggy tail 
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the leg mostly. it looked sorta... noodley? i was kinda wondering why the paw was twisted like that but i assumed that was to show the color of the paw pad, correct?
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yuh..show the color and also cause some people said I should try showing more toes and stuff....and I wasn't sure hoe to uuuh..position the paw -.-' WHERED YOU GO
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Thankyou X3 Hopefully I'll have it out in a couple of days
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Ok 8D Show it to me maybe when you get done with it c:
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