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KYAokay — When I'm with you, it's like being on a cloud
Published: 2014-08-24 04:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 813; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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I was all like: "I have no idea how cute romance works xDD Ooooh, I know! Put 'em on a clouud :,D ahahahha I'm so alone it's funny xD"But srsly, t'was lot's of fun experimenting with styles :> These characters are adorable
Requesting critiques cuz I'm hardcore and I wanna hear all my flaws and try to kill those lil mothafukaz in the future. (I know the outlines are probably too dark for one thing 
They also don't have shadows under them cuzzzz.....idek i suck)When your art is lame and boring...COVER IT UP WITH TEXTURES. MANY, MANY TEXTURES. :,DDDDD
Entry for this awesome contest~ Contest Time! :Dsoooo.. I'm making another contest again ;w;
Anyone can join
• RULES •
1. No base please.
2. Must be your own work
3. No NSFW art
4. Traditional and digital are both accepted!
5. Ponies, humans, anthros etc. are accepted!
• PRIZES •
• 1st Place - 1000
/ Full Color drawing from me / Animated Page Doll• 2nd Place - 800
/ Simple drawing from me / Non-animated page doll• 3rd Place - 500
/ Simple drawing• WHAT TO DO •
All you guys have to do is to draw my character, Ree Ree together with her sweet munchkins, RJ!
References : Reeane - https://reeane.deviantart.com/art/Mah-Ree-465760828
RJ - https://reeane.deviantart.com/art/RJ-466952409
Of them together - https://reeane.deviantart.com/art/Beep-466989702
• DEADLINE •
Deadline is on SEPTEMBER 20, 2014!
• HOW TO SUBMIT •
Just link me to your entry on this journal!
• OPTIONAL •
It would be nice if you also make a (all da cool kidz are entering, u should too ;w; )
Wish me luck, darlings~
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Comments: 27
Here we go! *Is not good with critiques*
This is just awesome! The details in their manes and tails are very unique, and the pointillism you’ve added on the cloud makes it a whole lot better.
The anatomy on the ponies are well done, along with the shading. One thing I really liked was how you made their tails slightly wrap around each other. Thats just adorable. And the heart in front where it says “RJ+Ree=e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
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i agree with your critique ^^
i click that was unfair but i want to click fair XD
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np
it's was an accident XD !
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Thank you so much for the super nice critique! :,D
*I thought thsi critique was "FAIR"...Fair like a princess*
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its cute is beautiful is is.. ADORABLE!
love! love! love!
your draws its adorables c:
(sorry my english ; > ;..)
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Thank you so much, dear! :,)
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Aww it's so cute! ^-^ And their tails connecting, snap! I really like the way how you drew it.
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Awws. :3 so cute ~
Im not really sure how cute romance should go either. XD I drew my OTP ponified and they were frenching, but that does not count. Hm. When I think romantic, I think of frolicking though a field of *rainbow* flowers or stargazing with someone. But that's just me
good luck in the contest!
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Yuss, that sounds cute ;3; If I had my other half we would mostly just act like friends and occasionally just stand next to each other with our shades on, looking in the distance all epic like. bootiful romancz.
Thank you~ :,3
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Ugh too cute.
Okay I can critique this right now lets go.
Yeah you know what I'm just gonna end up saying all the good things.
The patterns in general are amazing. Most noticeably on the coat and mane.
Your linework is very clean (but that's like the rest of your other works so you know that)
I wish I could zoom in more to see the textures you used but yeah only clicks once.
THE EYES. If they were looking at the camera it would burn through my emotionless soul.
The shading is simplistic so not much to look at there and I almost didn't see the shadows there. Sometimes not taking too much attention away is all it needs to do.
Now that I do notice the shadows i feel there needs to be more shine cuz they are a bit on the dark side.
But you know as I barely even noticed them it's more nitpicking than actual critique.
I give this much high score. Great job. Good luck. Looks amazing. Continue the good work. ^_^
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Thank you so much for the great critique! :,D
Yup, I'm still trying to figure out what shading style works best for me. I guess here it's more of a tone difference rather than actual shading xD
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Isn't tone difference what shading means? Lol
Yeah finding your style is difficult.
But whatever you do end up doing it seems to be pretty awesome.
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Don't you use your fancy logic on me xD What I mean was- usually shading is a darker shade of the same color, while here the shading doesn't darken as much as it changes into a different color.
Thanks, dude
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