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ts0k0 [2013-01-28 09:26:00 +0000 UTC]

AAaaaaa, why didn't I notice this?!~
This is a rather pretty piece!~

/I'm sorry, Ateski, but I do have to add, and you don't have to read it ahsdljahsd
Flipping it horizontally, the eyes seem to be uneven, with the right (her left) eye being a bit bigger~ Same goes with the breast area (but that could be just the cloth, tee hee)~ The angle on the left (her right) shoulder appears more towards facing the viewer rather than to the side, and then perhaps the bones on the chest could appear more visible?~ As seen in a stock photo here: [link]
/of course this might be just semi-realism so
/well, if only I were actually good at anatomy, because I'm obviously not

I absolutely love how you colored the skin!~ It's so close to real!~
And the hair, aaa~♥♥
I wish I could practice enough to make some, too~

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studio-g-artworx [2012-11-22 16:04:19 +0000 UTC]

This is a lovely piece of work. I love her eyes and you've done a really good job balancing colour definition, whilst not making it look too 'solid', so it more looks like a portrait, rather than a drawing.

If just one thing goes against this piece, it's that her dress looks a little underworked, compared to the rest of her, especially if you compare it with how you've worked her hair. It's just a small point, as the colours you've used are gorgeous, it just seems to lack the definition you've given the rest of the piece.

It's just a minor point though as in every other respect this is a lovely piece of work.

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