Chaossymbol [2011-12-04 12:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Finally I have found time to read your new story.The beginning is petty good and less complicated to read than your earlier work, but what catched my eye is that you used,, they" instead of,, you". On the other side I like your picture very much . It is very well done and the small picture on the wall a nice extra.Hehe, seems that all are crazy for the treasure .
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eppathefox [2011-11-22 21:09:12 +0000 UTC]
someone likes sneasles.
HronawmonsTamer [2011-11-22 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]
Pretty nice so far! I like the pic!