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kyogia2864 — Night Crescent M4 Pt1

Published: 2011-11-22 20:05:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 342; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Description As the time comes, the snow were decreasing a lot but the dangers of the weather cannot be skipped for the peoples of the village.

Our story continues in a not so cold night in our home, I and my team where relaxing with a conforting fireplace with no worries but in the day Gunpowder send us a request relationated with the disbanded Slasher Gang, now his minions was for his own at his situation, our request is about recruit any Sneasel for Gunpowder own business and search for any treasure that his last leader maybe left before leave this world.

I was daydreaming about the treasure while watching the window but Barnabas only talked about the gang and how to recruit them while Tyrian was in recovery from his sickness.

Barnabas: We will convince them with the benefits of being a Rogue before any Merchant try to talk with them!
Ruffo: (sigh) Yes!
Barnabas: Are you listening?
Ruffo: Oh! Yea the treasure!
Barnabas: (facepalm) Tomorrow we will find any ex member of the gang ok?

The next day I and Barnabas where walking to the forest, while my mind was distracted for the goods of the treasure but some noises started to appear, my daydreaming stopped and I stayed alerted.

Ruffo: Did you heard that my friend?
Barnabas: Yes, maybe we found them!
Ruffo: Or maybe they found us!

All the Sneasels surrounded us and with a slightly fierce face one of them tried to attack but I talked before my partner did it.

Ruffo: Whats the matter with you guys, we only wanted to talk with less violence don’t you?
Sneasel 1: What do they want!?, wait do they are those guys who attacked us for that seal marker?
Barnabas: Emmhh... Yes but...!
Sneasel2: Shut up ww don’t want more problems so now leave before attack us!
Barnabas: ...

The moment was intense now with less than a few seconds for his attack I tried to talk with them.

Ruffo: Wait, we are here to tell about a delightful proposition!
Sneasel 1: And what is that proposition?
Ruffo We know his situation but why don’t join us, the others guilds will reject us for being bad guys but for us they fit perfectly but thats not all, the trait will be better with less risk than your past leader, what do they think?
Sneasel 3: Hey guys maybe that Zoroark is telling something more better for us!
Sneasel 4: We need to discuss it!

All the Snesels regrouped and argued for a few minutes in a low tone, Barnabas was suspiring for being free of that tight situation.

Sneasel 2: Fine we will go with us!
Barnabas: Really?
Sneasel 5: Yes, our life is more hard than they think!
Sneasel 6: Everyone want to forget the past!
Ruffo: If they really want to forget the past, why don’t let us the treasure of your evil leader and don’t remember those hard times!

A few seconds later the Sneasels agreed with the deal and let us to grab the Slacher’s treasure, that consist in a medium chest filled with golden coins, my greed maked me to grab a small part of the loot but my partner didn’t liked but at the end they let me to keep a very small part of them and use it for necessary situations of the future.

A few minutes later, we arrived to the guild but Gunpowder senses attracted him to the treasure, wanting to open and look and the gold

Gunpowder: Argh... looks like my freshwater sailors brought me ma treasure!
Barnabas: And we recruited some new members Sir!
Gunpowder: Aye Aye... fine my boys, now let me feel the pleasure of a Pirate and booty for a while!

The day end with no problems but thats no the end of the request for the moment, meanwhile we returned to our house to rest for a while.

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What I can say? I wanted to do something more creative to be related with the story and the reader gets a better idea of how is, for some reason I could resist to do that but the time and work occupied almost all of my life.
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Comments: 3

Chaossymbol [2011-12-04 12:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Finally I have found time to read your new story.
The beginning is petty good and less complicated to read than your earlier work, but what catched my eye is that you used,, they" instead of,, you". On the other side I like your picture very much . It is very well done and the small picture on the wall a nice extra.
Hehe, seems that all are crazy for the treasure .

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eppathefox [2011-11-22 21:09:12 +0000 UTC]

someone likes sneasles.

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HronawmonsTamer [2011-11-22 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice so far! I like the pic!

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