47ness [2016-08-28 09:32:42 +0000 UTC]
I like your sense of depth here. Nice separation of midground and background.My only thought is it lacks a focal point. I can see you've got a few pieces that do that, so you know what I mean.. :> Sometimes something as simple as raked lighting can liven up the composition too; like maybe a version of this where the rain is ending and sunbeams begin piercing through the clouds...!
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Kyokazu In reply to 47ness [2016-08-28 10:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Finally some good feedback, thanks a lot!i'll try to improve more !
47ness In reply to Kyokazu [2016-08-28 10:17:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I like roaming around this site (I think most other dA artists these days spend their social time on FB or Instagram or wherever)Environments are always fun to learn, I think.
Kyokazu In reply to 47ness [2016-08-28 11:50:49 +0000 UTC]
it is fun though not until you get serious enough,lol.
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