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Published: 2005-03-18 14:47:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description A grey jar of ashes stood erect on the mahogany pedestal. The glow of the stand illuminated the entire ghastly structure. Engravings littered and dusted the walls; producing an eerie feeling of being in an ancient cave. Caricatures of people being tortured in disgusting and grisly ways helped create the illusion of being in the chambers of Hell itself. Shadows draped every nook and cranny in the vast mausoleum. The deep bass rumble of the clock's pendulum striking its inside walls could be heard throughout the chamber. Tick--Tock--Tick--Tock--Tick--Tock. The sound was maddening. Nearly to the point where any normal person would loose their last grip on sanity and fall into a fit of lunacy. Tick--Tock--Tick--Tick--Tock--Tock--Tick--Tick--Tock. The speed of the rhythm ever increasing. As the clock's pace increases the shadow's mileage began to diminish, leaving only the arachnids to their vampiric way of sustenance. Feeding off the life of the other insects. A figure wrapped in a black velvet coat advanced cautiously to a rose coloured entryway. The door opened gently into a sacrificial dorm. The shade pulled a dirk out of its sheath.

       "Which one to choose?" the figure muttered seductively to itself. Looking at a wall shaped like what could be called a makeshift morgue. Numbers were written on the drawers; in order “Seven to one” The smell of rotting corpses choked what was left of the dying air. A drawer slowly pulls open to reveal a severed woman's body in all its gory glory.

       "Perfect!" exclaimed the outline. Gusts of air like God's breath poured out in torrents as the door shut tight. "A night of ecstasy waits" could now be visibly seen on the exterior of the door.

        Tick--Tock--Tick--Tock--Tick--Tock. The clock continued on with its miserable chime. The only sound produced in the tomb of the embalmed. A grey jar of ashes stood limply on the mahogany pedestal. Forever to remain alone in it's sepulchre.
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Comments: 15

Forsaken101 [2005-04-07 13:57:14 +0000 UTC]

I heard three is also an important religious number.

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Forsaken101 [2005-04-04 14:08:04 +0000 UTC]

With the number seven it sounds like your trying to get a little religion mixed in. And by severed you mean cut into peices, not to be picky, but I always thought it meant a 'piece' cut off of something. But anyways its really dark and eerie, and its well worth a + fav.

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kyoretsu In reply to Forsaken101 [2005-04-07 13:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes, someone noticed the seven. I was trying to communicate a religious undertone in it. Not only was it religious, Seven is the number for all sorts of other things [link]

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Caving-in-Stone [2005-03-20 22:01:02 +0000 UTC]

--giggles at jar ref-- I love this. It just kicks major ass!!

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Faku [2005-03-18 23:42:41 +0000 UTC]

very nice, kinda sounds like your necropheliac one though, and whats with the dirk? also what does the jar symbalize?

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kyoretsu In reply to Faku [2005-03-21 14:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Here's the run down brett, dirk is a type of knife. Jar is...I don't think I should try to explain that one...and it is the necrophiliac one.

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kyoretsu In reply to kyoretsu [2005-03-22 02:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Actually the jar is an innuendo for a penis.

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Faku In reply to kyoretsu [2005-03-22 02:24:05 +0000 UTC]

oooh...right....umm I knew that, didn't I say a dirk was a knife? w/e so like...let me get this straight(in stoner voice) you, you are say, saying that the jars meaning is just too deep that not even the writer can can comprehend the true spiritual physical and emotional meaning of the pottery?

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Pyro-Kedith In reply to Faku [2005-03-21 07:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Brett sometimes you're too innocent......

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kyoretsu In reply to Pyro-Kedith [2005-03-22 02:43:17 +0000 UTC]

you alright there brett?

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Pyro-Kedith In reply to kyoretsu [2005-03-28 06:06:48 +0000 UTC]

God I guess I'm forbidden to joke around. Brett I know you're not innocent. This may shock you but I LIKE TO MESS AROUND TOO.

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Faku In reply to Pyro-Kedith [2005-03-22 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

o0 is that what you think? you think I'm innocent? ok micheal how freakin innocent do you think I am? like a little "boy" walking around with flowers, well if that's it then hell fuckin no! just because I put on that I'm innocent doesn't mean that I freakin am, you don't even know me, ok, you have no idea what actually goes on inside my head, I have a very ove activ imagination, I can imagine any thing, from 2 people screwing to a slaughter, everynight I lay in bed and just listen, when I hear something suspicious I usually just try and calm myself down, but sometimes I freak out and I can just imagine looking through my window and seeing a pair of glowing eyes glaring back, I have many times, as a child I would sneak around my house at night cause I was so scared that I thought something was in the house trying to get me, micheal I'm not in the least bit freakin innocent, I just like to mess around.

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Pyro-Kedith In reply to Faku [2005-03-28 06:04:00 +0000 UTC]

? Dude, that was a joke... get a grip man.

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Faku In reply to Pyro-Kedith [2005-04-01 22:24:47 +0000 UTC]

it didn't sound like a joke...but still it sounded like something you would say and actually mean it.

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Pyro-Kedith In reply to Faku [2005-04-03 06:21:59 +0000 UTC]

with me, everything sounds like I would mean it, except anything bad about Momo or Sally. That's a no.

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