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It looks alright right?

I asked a friend for a cute girl to draw for practice, cause I don't normally draw cute characters, and he told me to draw Hikari from the anime Brave Witches. I saw she has a sister so I drew Takami as well.
As I have heard, Brave/Strike Witches is notorious for it's panty shots, amongst other things, but I said I would give those kind of drawings a break.

(unfortunately that didn't last long cause my other drawing im working on shows more skin...)

I was having a lot of trouble getting the coloring correct as I was trying to have some strong sunlight behind them, but that was far too difficult for me at the moment. It was removing all motivation to finish the drawing, so I gave up on that and did some quick coloring, and some lighting as well. I didn't do any shadows cause I just wanted to finish and move on to something else.

As always, please, PLEASE leave me some constructive criticism!
I always appreciate it when people point out some flaws in my artwork, and tips on how to improve in that area!
In fact I daresay that leaving me a critique is more valuable than favoriting my art (not that faves aren't appreciated!).

Description
It looks alright right?

I asked a friend for a cute girl to draw for practice, cause I don't normally draw cute characters, and he told me to draw Hikari from the anime Brave Witches. I saw she has a sister so I drew Takami as well.
As I have heard, Brave/Strike Witches is notorious for it's panty shots, amongst other things, but I said I would give those kind of drawings a break.

(unfortunately that didn't last long cause my other drawing im working on shows more skin...)

I was having a lot of trouble getting the coloring correct as I was trying to have some strong sunlight behind them, but that was far too difficult for me at the moment. It was removing all motivation to finish the drawing, so I gave up on that and did some quick coloring, and some lighting as well. I didn't do any shadows cause I just wanted to finish and move on to something else.

As always, please, PLEASE leave me some constructive criticism!
I always appreciate it when people point out some flaws in my artwork, and tips on how to improve in that area!
In fact I daresay that leaving me a critique is more valuable than favoriting my art (not that faves aren't appreciated!).