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Kzira03 — Seeing him again
Published: 2012-03-17 05:48:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 22661; Favourites: 1635; Downloads: 97
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What should I do if I see him again? If our path crossed once again.Should I be happy?
Should I be sad?
Should I cry a litre of tears?
Should I laugh for falling for him?
Should I be mad at myself?
Will my chest hurt again?
Will the time stop once more if I look in his eyes?
I tried to forget about him after all these years, I really did!
I tried loving someone else but it felt like it wasn't right.
My mind forgot about him but a piece of myself and my heart wasn't able to move on.
I thought it was a merely obsession but it wasn't!
What should I do? Tell me!
Now that he is standing a feet away from me, why is he wearing a surprised look on his face filled with mixed emotions?
Why is my feet rooted in this spot while he is walking towards me?
Why can't my eyes leave his?
Will he still remember me after all these years even if it's only my name?
Should I forgive him for befriending me and suddenly disappearing?
No! Don't come any closer! But my voice won't come out.
He called my name. I should hit him for leaving me but my body is frozen.
His eyes say so much emotion and I can't seem to avert his gaze.
He is standing a few inches from me and his grip tightened in my arms as he says my name once more.
"I'm sorry and I love you"
Those where the last words I heard from him before my mouth was covered by his.
Seeing him again was love at first sight once more.
Seeing him again made myself complete.
Seeing him again filled the gap in my heart.
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Comments: 171
you have a rather unique syntax, and structure that causes your poem to stand out among the average love poems. I appreciate your poem very much
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Oh wow thank you for the nice words 
But glad you like this poem
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Aww thank you 
Sorry if it might be a bit cheesy lol
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Welcome!!
Not at all x3 hehe
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Love it and I can relate to that poem. I almost cried. 
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i did cry when I read this because many people can relate to those feelings though the ending usually doesnt happen I love it
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awww! that was super sweet! *wipes tears away* And you only made one mistake, im from America and I always make mistakes, I had a D in english! I suck at my own language, but have an A in French and Japanese! ANYWAY! this poem you wrote was epic and sweet! I loved it so much!
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thank you so much
lol yeah English has so many grammar rules and I tend to forget it. Me too I always get A in other language and I also took French hahahaha
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yeah french speakers! oh, in the fourth line, you put litre of tears, I think you were trying to spell liter of tears. Other than that you're poem was awesome! Thank goddness for spellcheck, I suck I spelling!
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That's not the only gap he filled. If you catch my meaning.
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Awww, why did you change the picture? 
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lol you triple posted
I changed it because the art is not mine and some people want to take it down.
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Oh, I'm SOOOO SORRY!!!! I didnt see it up, so I thought it didnt post! Im SOOOOOO sorry. It was an accident I promise. Im extremely computer-stupid...
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no no it's okay
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Awww, why did you change the picture?
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Aww, Wgy did you change the picture?
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Couple in the picture are the country-representation characters Japan and Taiwan from the anime Hetalia, if anyone was wondering...
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very pretty. After reading, i had a few tears, but more good feelings than anything else. like you i had someone leave... i am still waiting to see if they will ever come back, or if the end of that story has been told. your bit of writing is beautiful to me. thanks for posting.
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Great Poem! And I love how you used a picture of Japan and Taiwan <3
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At first I was like:
Romance... Ugh...
Then I read it and was like:
My emotions just got high off this beauty...
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Very beautiful. The emotion poured out. Greatly done.
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Well I'd like to say that the emotion in this poem seems very sincere and is quite...well not unique in the world, but definitely unique to you... very heart-warming and, for a lack of a better word, sensual. Don't worry about your grammar it's fine. the way something is written matter very little so long as the message gets across
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Awww, it's such a cute poem. I like it 
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Very beautiful poem 
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Wow just wow. That was amazing. I wrote a poem for my first submission to dA too.
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Wow. This is sweet. Too sweet. I think Imma gonna cry.
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This is very beautiful. It reminds me of a story I read. So sweet.
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This is so beautiful ;u;
Can I use this poetry as lyric for my song? I'll credit you for the lyrics of course
( sorry for my bad english ;n; )
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thank you
oh yeah sure
your english is pretty good and I understood you
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thank you so much!
I'll link the music here when I'm done with it
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