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Published: 2020-03-07 20:52:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1189; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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And I never wanted anything from you
Except everything you had
And what was left after that too, oh.
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March 2020 journal by illustrational
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I cant start to comment before I say this looks super cool!
First of all, the pose look so different and fantastic. By different I mean it's a pose that we do not usually see around. The action line looks well-drawn. The expression on the character really supports the pose and the mood of the drawing. I really liked the concept of the drawing. One more last thing is that I loved the character design. It looks so original.
About the points those can be improved, anatomy looks a little bit off. The belly looks unnatural and the feet looks so big. Also the face shape looks a little bit odd. Other than that the line art does not look so confident. Especially for the tail, lines look to curvy and straight for some places especially. I think you added too many lines than it is needed on the feet too. Lastly I wish you used undertones and different highlights. (for example purple shadows or orange lights) Having a color that is a little bit darker than the base color as a shadow makes drawings flatter I think. But of course those are my opinions! You do not have to agree with them all :3 :3
Overall, piece looks super cool! Keep up doing amazing artwork and hope you have a good day!
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Thanks for the comment! Just so you know: she doesn't have human anatomy. Her face, especially nose and mouth, push forward, and her feet are huge and abnormally shaped (if the long toes don't give it away). (I disagree on all of the feet critique actually, just because her feet aren't human.) So I can't use that part of the critique! I did use undertones (purples and blues, specifically, in the shadows), but I guess just not enough! 
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Maybe next time you can make it more obvious? Cause i actually thought that she might have some anatomy other than human, but at the same time they looked like they are mistakes, so i wrote them anyway, Im glad that i could help!
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Hard to make it more obvious at this angle, but I do need to make a reference sheet for her! 
Thanks again! Always appreciate good, solid feedback!
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Hehe that would be good, Im happy that I could help :3
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This is so...interesting...on one side it is a very sexy angle but on the other there is that crazy foothand...fingertoe and I get all the Heebyjeebiese! I know you are in Project Comment and I want to ask if the lowest fold on her left side is supposed to be the top of her hipbone but I don't know the physiology of this individual.
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The fold is supposed to be over her hip bone. Happy to hear any normal-anatomical feedback you have though! Always looking to learn.
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It has been a while since I have drawn but with regards to the hips. Where the butt would end and the back starts to curve back out is where the hip bone usually sits. When you sit, place your hands on your hip bone fingers facing forwards. You will notice that when sitting completely upright the distance between the top of your leg and the top of your hip bone is about 1 hand width. Hope this helps
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Nice and interesting work at the same time!
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Thank you so much!
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The area where the spine meets the tail is just mwah! (Chef's kiss!) Still loving those little skin rolls and the highlights on them. And the curled toes! And, love how relaxed she looks, her entire body is posed at maximum comfort.
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