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Lady-Rai-Frost — When the Mask Comes Off

Published: 2006-10-10 02:50:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 35906; Favourites: 291; Downloads: 144
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Description Title: When the Mask Comes Off
Series: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Rating: Pg-13 (for some violence)

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Prologue:

The Good Morning Surprise

Katara could still smell the storm in the air when she woke up. Her sleeping bag was damp from morning dew and she shivered. Half considering going back to sleep, she made sure her arms weren’t exposed to the frigid morning air.

One slow glance around camp told her she that was the first one up. Knowing that some movements could wake Toph, she didn’t shift any more than to reach for the parka beneath her head and wrap it around her upper body.

Getting out of her warm cocoon seemed too horrible a thought to even consider but Katara also realized that if she didn’t start a fire she would be cold until someone else did. Looking up at the sky and figuring that it was around mid-morning already, she decided that breakfast should be first on her list of daily chores.

Suppressing a yawn, she looked through tearing eyes for her clothes and shoes. They were bundled beside her and she grabbed them, pulling them on over her under garments within the small confines of her cocoon before slipping out into the freezing air around her.

The storm had rolled in almost immediately after the sun had set, and shortly after that rain had pelted the group, forcing Aang to land their tired and now wet ten ton flying friend.

The forest that surrounded their camp was thick with trees. They all seemed as tall as the sky and Katara had no idea what they were called, but their needle-like leaves were a pain to sleep on. It had taken the group nearly an hour to find a suitable place to land Appa and by the time they had landed they were exhausted. Instead of making a fire that would just extinguish in the rain they had turned in.

Katara walked past Appa’s giant, snoring form and over to the large saddle beside him. She rummaged through bags until she found the moose-deer jerky that Sokka had managed to make over the last couple of days. By mixing it with the brine from the other supply of meat and a little fresh water, she’d be able to make a nice soup for breakfast in very little time. If she managed to find some nuts and a hardy supple of berries, Aang could eat something fresh.

She could feel the pull of a nearby water source and -picking up her cooking pot- she made her way in that direction. It was perfect because during the early morning she and Aang could practice waterbending, and then while Toph’s lessons of earthbending took over in the mid-afternoon, she and Sokka could bathe.

Blessed with a fairly accurate sense of direction she made it to the river and back to camp with little trouble. She even managed to find a few suitable berry bushes to gather from, and had pockets them. Though the water was heavy in her arms she knew that she had gotten a lot stronger over the past few months.

This was a good thing for the Fire Nation was still searching for them night and day. Luckily, though, they had finally arrived at a point where there were more allies than enemies in the towns they came across.

After setting the heavy pot on the ground near where she planned on making a fire, Katara used some nearby rocks to outline a fire pit, worried that even wet, the slightest stray ember could set the whole forest ablaze. She managed to get the fire started, the heavy lifting making her hands much more usable now that her blood was pumping through them.

As she placed the pot in the middle of the roaring fire she couldn’t help but feel that something was off. For one thing, Toph -almost always up as early as she was- had yet to come out of her own small rock tent. Katara shredded jerky and poured a bit of brine into the pot. She warmed herself and then realized that something else was bothering her: Momo was no where to be seen.

She took a deep breath and gulped, hoping that her pounding heart and sweaty hands were all an overreaction. Shaking her head to clear it, she decided to wake up her brother; a little company should help ease the bad feeling in the back of her mind. Standing and moving towards his bed she noticed that he was turned away from her... that all of her companions had their faces hidden. The bad feeling very quickly established itself as spine tingling fear.

She reached for her brother’s shoulders, shaking him slightly. Two times she did this, the second time was much harder than the first. “Sokka,” she grumbled at him. When he didn’t even make a sound she leaned closer to check if he was faking it. That was when she saw the red staining his hair and skin and she realized that he wasn’t sleeping at all: the large and bloody cut forming at his hair line was the cause of his unconsciousness.

Katana stood up so quickly that her foot almost skidded out from under her in protest. The trap that had been sprung around her was painfully obvious now. Fire Nation soldiers spring out from behind trees, and outnumbered ten to one, she fought them off with the now boiling water from her pot for as long as she could. The battle was a pointless one though and when the business end of her brother’s stolen club met with the back of her head she drifted off into darkness knowing that she had failed.
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Comments: 54

popwiz15 [2012-07-30 18:24:16 +0000 UTC]

When Topj wakes up she's gonna wup your asses.

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Firestar97 [2011-08-20 17:45:05 +0000 UTC]

love this

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to Firestar97 [2011-08-22 05:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!

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Firestar97 In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2011-08-22 10:36:23 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Firestar97 In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2011-08-22 10:34:44 +0000 UTC]

lol

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daniyell37 [2011-01-10 22:16:30 +0000 UTC]

hmm the title sounds so familiar, maybe ive read this on fanfiction and i dont remember. but either way im going to go read this at ff right now because this first chapter has me so intrigued already

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RenjiAbaraiGR [2010-12-25 14:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey can I ask you something?
Is there another site where I can read your fanfics?

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to RenjiAbaraiGR [2010-12-27 23:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah fanfiction.net has them too

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moonlight1314 [2010-07-19 10:10:36 +0000 UTC]

You have me in a curious mind frame... I must continue! XD

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theblackrose99 [2010-01-22 01:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is one of the best fanfics ever.

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to theblackrose99 [2010-02-09 21:38:28 +0000 UTC]

*squee* <3

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Astro-V [2009-11-09 06:43:19 +0000 UTC]

wow this is my first story that i have read since being here and
so far its the best!!!
love it

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NinjaHandyMan08 [2008-07-21 07:52:38 +0000 UTC]

i've read the whole fic and i love it !!!!!!!!!

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firelord65 [2008-07-21 00:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, I read it before, but I don't believe I had commented... hehe, so I am now. ^.^ LOVE LOVELOVEIT!! Hehe, do you know any other Zutara fics that are good? Besides this one

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to firelord65 [2008-07-23 15:40:25 +0000 UTC]

actually, i don't read a lot of Zutara fics o.o

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firelord65 In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2008-07-23 21:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, that might account for the non-similar styles/ideas of others ^.^ Kool!

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yumifan100 [2008-01-01 20:59:53 +0000 UTC]

omg love it!! it is so awsome!! love your fan fictions!!!

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9shadowcat9 [2007-12-16 19:09:04 +0000 UTC]

I have a word off advice, [link] Join and post this story. It's good.

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to 9shadowcat9 [2007-12-17 00:38:01 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, thank you but i already have ^^

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9shadowcat9 In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2007-12-23 22:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Really? Can you send over the link?

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to 9shadowcat9 [2007-12-24 07:08:54 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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missladylaura [2007-11-21 03:36:02 +0000 UTC]

koolies i loved WTMCO Conquest and im loving this aswell

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sazzlysarah [2007-10-10 20:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Jeez... this is a year old today...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!1!1!11!ones!

I'm 17 in 2 days...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME TOO!!!!!!

*dies*

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to sazzlysarah [2007-10-10 22:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I realized that as well!
Happy Birthday!

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sakura3189 [2007-08-21 05:21:54 +0000 UTC]

i've read before and enjoyed it immensely great job!!!

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BlueGreenGrey [2007-07-07 02:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...I think I originally read this on FF.net...maybe I'm mistaken? Oh well, it's awesome as all Hell!

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to BlueGreenGrey [2007-07-11 02:57:03 +0000 UTC]

No no, I have it posted on ff.net as well ^^

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rice-nd-music [2007-04-04 00:17:10 +0000 UTC]

great style! better story!!!!

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to rice-nd-music [2007-04-04 21:11:46 +0000 UTC]

lol, just wait till you read the rest! it's get better!

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rice-nd-music In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2007-04-07 20:18:04 +0000 UTC]

XD

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rachaelm5 [2007-03-17 13:25:39 +0000 UTC]

I got pulled into this one because of the artwork. I was looking around for Zutara bits and firebending generally, and just stumbled right into this. What terrific luck!

You plunge us right into the action in this prologue, and you keep us focused on a single character's point of view the whole time. That's a sign of good, solid storytelling, and it serves as an excellent hook for your readers. On we go...!

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RayeofSunshine [2007-02-09 12:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I am finally reading these!
I absolutely LOVE your Discriptions! You're got to show me the ropes! I am your new fan!

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to RayeofSunshine [2007-02-10 00:59:26 +0000 UTC]

yay!! lol. i love new fans ><

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RayeofSunshine In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2007-02-10 01:00:54 +0000 UTC]

*Honers you*

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to RayeofSunshine [2007-02-10 01:01:42 +0000 UTC]

aww -^o^-

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RayeofSunshine In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2007-02-10 01:03:55 +0000 UTC]

You seriously need to teach me about how to write! I like to write, but I'm not nearly as good as you!

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to RayeofSunshine [2007-02-10 01:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I’m flattered,
But first off, unfortunately writing cannot be taught. I gleaned my style from 15 years of reading all sorts of things… and I get better everyday. For example, reading the first couple of chapters of WTMCO and then reading one of the last, I can already see a maybe improvement in my writing.
I cannot teach you how to write, even if you managed to live right next door ot me and we’re my best friend. Just like Chii, my muse, cannot teach me how to draw. It’s all about practice and feedback.
If you’d like, I could read some of your stuff and tell you want I think I would do instead, but in the end all I would be doing is changing your style inot mine, and no one wants to be a copycat by force. O.O

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lunarProtector [2007-02-02 01:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I can't believe I didn't post on here yet, but this was awesome.

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to lunarProtector [2007-02-02 02:15:50 +0000 UTC]

LOL thanks you! Yeah, this chpater is kinda lonely >>

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Aensland [2007-02-01 20:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Heh.
Youre right; this is far more pallettable (or however the fuck THATs spelled...) than a lot of other stuff I've read...
I do, however, have to get to bed, and finally reading something interesting is the spark what fired onto the tinder of sleep waiting in the wings.
I go now to rest; Hopefully, that is.

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to Aensland [2007-02-01 21:46:15 +0000 UTC]

yay! thank you for reading it Fuzzy!

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SkyportCafe [2007-01-25 15:09:36 +0000 UTC]

I really liked your prologue. It was very interesting.

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to SkyportCafe [2007-01-25 21:24:56 +0000 UTC]

*bows* thank you. I have always thought it let much to want, but its brought alot of people in to the story so i guess its okay >>

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2007-01-26 08:01:32 +0000 UTC]

agh typos abaound "left much to want"

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kageisuke [2006-12-08 03:57:53 +0000 UTC]

::throws hands into the air:: New victim, right here! I can't remember where I got the recommendation to read this, but so far I'm liking it! Besides: Reading is fundamental~!

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to kageisuke [2006-12-08 18:14:18 +0000 UTC]

YES!! *ties you with fanrope* got you!!

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kageisuke In reply to Lady-Rai-Frost [2006-12-09 05:18:33 +0000 UTC]

::struggles in vain:: sighs:: Yep, too late... =_=

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Juria-Chan [2006-12-06 03:45:44 +0000 UTC]

[Gasp] I've already read the entire series and I forgot to fave... I beg for forgiveness!!

[bows] ... [... and faves.]

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Lady-Rai-Frost In reply to Juria-Chan [2006-12-06 05:39:24 +0000 UTC]

^.^ thank you!! *bows back* I'm gald you liked it!

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sylvacoer [2006-12-03 10:27:18 +0000 UTC]

... ow. And sokka's so not going to liek they used his own club!

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