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lady-warrior — Please Don't Die

Published: 2006-07-14 21:34:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1690; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 21
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Description No he ain't dead this is a pic preview and well part from the finfic I need to finally write.

Botan was thrown roughly to the cold stone floor. She put out her hands to break her fall and bloodied her palms in doing so. She quicky turned back to the one who had thrown her there but they had already left.
As she pushed herself into a sitting position she heard a commotion from her left. Instantly her head snapped in that direction.
She saw, to her horror, two huge goblin (think the demons Hiei fought in the movie) like demons standing over a figure clad in black that lay on the floor, unmoving. The two goblins were kicking and poking the figure with their swords as they spit taunts and insults at it.
"C'mon, welp," one cackled in a high siren of a voice. "Aren't you going to cut us up with your sword?"
The other joined in with his buddies taunts. "Yes, Hiei," it added, giving the figure a kick that turned it on its side. "Where's your courage now, or didn't you ever have any?"
Botan stared in surprise. Hiei? How did he end up here? And why isn't he doing anything about those two jerks?
The goblin kicked Hiei again. His body turned all the way over so now he lay on his back. She heard him grunt in pain even though he was unconcious.
"Your courage is gone because it was never there," one said leaning down and grinning in the senseless demon's face. "You have no courage and have no strength. "You're nothing."
Just then Botan noticed a red ribbon snaking down over the black leather of Hiei's coat and pooling on the floor around him in a hot sticky mess. Ohmigod! He's bleeding!
The demons kicked Hiei again and Botan heard something crack. It sounded like one fo his ribs had broken. The onna couldn't stand it anymore. She couldn't just sit there and let them beat him to death. She stood, sprained ankle or no sprained ankle, and limped over the demons and Hiei. "Stop that!" she shouted at the demons. "You're going to kill him!"
The demons stopped their fun and looked down at her. The one demon sneered at her bnd aimed another kick at Hiei. Botan stood in his way and stared at the demon defiantly. "You've done enough!" she told them.
"Who are you to order us around, wench?" the sneering one demanded.
The other demon looked at Botan a little longer then looked at his partner and shook his head.
Sneering One looked at Headshaker and the two communicated with their eyes. Suddenly, to Botan's surprise and disbelieve, the two turned from her and left the room, slamming the door loudly as they did.
Botan stood there a moment then knelt down beside Hiei. "Hiei," she said, leaning over him.
Whe he didn't respond she wrapped her arms around him and pulled his head and upper body into her lap, not caring if his blood stained her torn and ripped pink kimono.
"What have they done to you?" she asked him, though he couldn't hear her. She wasn't even sure he was breathing anymore.
She put her face close to his and felt cool air blowing on her cheek. Good. He was alive but just barely from what it looked like.
An image of the last time she's seen him came to her mind. His face had been scowling and his eyes had been cold and not to be argued with. "Stay here," he'd told her as he'd shoved her in the bushes. "and don't come out until I get back."
"But.. but..," she's started to protest.
"Stay here," he'd told her more firmly. "Stupid onna, just listen to me for once!"
Then she'd just listened to him and he's disappeared into the darkness to fight the demon who was trying to kill both her and him.
"You shouldn't have gone," she told him now. "I knew it wasn't a good idea. Now you're hurt more than you were before and we're both prisoners of the same demon you tried to fight."
She felt tears coming to her eyes. She wasn't sure why but she suddenly felt very guilty. When he'd left her there she'd pouted and said she hoped he lost.. Now she was eating those same words. She hadn't wanted this to happen to him.
"This is all my fault," she said, hugging his senseless form. "If I hadn't of wished for you to lose maybe you would have won and not gotten hurt." tears rolled down her cheeks. "I'm sorry. I'm so so sorry."
Suddenly a low raspy voice whispered a slurred periodic word in her ear. "...Onna..."
Botan's eye flew open in surprise. Onna? She lifted her head and stared at his face. His eyes were still closed and he didn't even seem to be awake. "Hiei?" she said as she stared at his face.
"Stu...pid... onna.." he slurred in a low gravelly voice that didn't sound a thing like his own.
"Hiei!" she exclaimed, dropping his body. "You're alive!"
When his back hit the stone floor he moaned in pain and opened his eyes partway. "Ow," he said.
"Oops," Botan said realizing what she'd done. She pulled his head back in his lap. "Sorry."
By then his eyes were open about halfway. Blood red orbes glared ar her in annoyance and slight anger. "I... told you... to stay.. put," he moaned.
"I did," she protested, realizing he thought she'd left her place.
"Then.. what are you doing here?" he demanded, his voice gaining strength.
"I got captured," she explained. "You were captured too and it looks like you lost fighting that demon. What happened?"
Hiei closed his eyes again and his head flopped sideways. He couldn't remember. "I.. don't.. know," he finally admitted after a long pause that was making Botan worry that he'd backed out again. "It's.. like I'm dreaming... I can't.. I can't.. remember."
That wasn't what the onna wanted to hear..
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Comments: 12

UlquiorraSchiffer22 [2011-02-15 03:24:37 +0000 UTC]

love the story...I want to read more of it ^0^
Please write more to the story, and if you have, please please please....tell me where to read it at!! XD

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Cheza-the-wolf-girl [2008-06-03 18:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww! Poor Hiei and Botan! T_T

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snow-white-angel [2006-11-25 17:25:16 +0000 UTC]

i read that story, the two shot? it was an awesome one, i think i'll fave this pic so my friend that's reading it can understand it when he got injured cuz she thought it was a minor cut *falls over* neway i loved it!

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firewalker71 [2006-07-14 22:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Lots of detail and emotion in the picture. Great job.

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Nicole-the-Echidna [2006-07-14 21:58:27 +0000 UTC]

FIRST COMMENT MUWAHAHA!! Any way the description was too long so I didn't bother to read it *smacked* Any way very nice pic! Captures ALOT of emotion!.... request for me PLZ

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lady-warrior In reply to Nicole-the-Echidna [2006-07-31 12:38:35 +0000 UTC]

what do you request for me to draw????????????????????????

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Nicole-the-Echidna In reply to lady-warrior [2006-07-31 20:38:46 +0000 UTC]

I request for you do draw mw a picture of my chara and Knuckles please

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lady-warrior In reply to Nicole-the-Echidna [2006-07-31 21:10:48 +0000 UTC]

MW?

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Nicole-the-Echidna In reply to lady-warrior [2006-07-31 21:56:37 +0000 UTC]

?

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lady-warrior In reply to Nicole-the-Echidna [2006-07-31 22:48:12 +0000 UTC]

you said MW whhen you told me your request. what does MW mean?

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Nicole-the-Echidna In reply to lady-warrior [2006-07-31 23:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Opps I ment "me"

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lady-warrior In reply to Nicole-the-Echidna [2006-07-14 22:51:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah?

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