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Published: 2014-08-18 11:32:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 616; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 11
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Commission for :TheComboist1191: (:Related content
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Ecco il disegno completato, complimento Luana un ritorno in grandissimo stile!!! La spada Γ¨ uscita davvero bene poi
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Grazie mille simo-kun. :3
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Wow I love this a bunch XDXDXD ^_^ Especially, the blade I can't take my eyes off of it.XDXD The only thing I would change is the background color or maybe brighten up Karina and Lester a little to make them not blend with the background so much.
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The design was soon changed, however, will be added costsbecause of too many changes that do not fall in the price. (:
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How much? It can't be much right? I just was wondering if you could brighten up Karina and Lester just so they're not blending in with le background.
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The costΒ is five dollars (:I'm sorry but continue to make changes to make the long and heavy. ^_^
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*sighes* Okay This is your email right? ----> shakino89@hotmail.itΒ Β Β How's the other work for me going?
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Yes.I'm sorry but if you want change you have to increase the cost because the commissions were at low cost wonder also good to explain in detail what you want.
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Actually I thought about it and the way it looks right now is fine for now actually. I think I'll make the background myself if you don't mind that. ^_^ Cause I'll have visual and control on how visible Karina and Lester, and the fact, now, I have to start watching my money 
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I will make him a black background giving the colors to the characters just wait until tomorrow and then edit that just remember that the rest of the work was done by me (:
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Okay. Yeah of course no worries I wouldn't do that to you. You'll get all the credit even if I edit it. After doing this and the other piece for me, I'm grateful for . ^_^ I'd never claim this as my own. And again, thank you so much for doing these for me 
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the woman's breasts are coming out of her clavicle. breasts shape near the armpits. for some tutorials:Β imgur.com/gallery/lFhuI . also her eyes are very bright, when the rest of her is dark.
the male to the left looks boring, probably the color of his clothing is very similar to the BG color.
the main male's eyes look dead and unfocused. if his eyebrows are furrowed, there should be some wrinkle. the sword being held with one hand, in such a position is awkward. usually a sword is held by the side that the arm is on, unless it is very small or not heavy. the cross-guard is unnecessarily thick and i found it odd you did not include a pommel. (also his hair looks kinda Β weird)
for the future, i hope you add more detail to your drawings.Β
ps -Β help.deviantart.com/81/
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Thanks for the critiques. Β (:
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you're welcome
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