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Published: 2003-04-10 15:58:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1200; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 252
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Description You wear those red shoes
And you think you're pretty
And you think you're cool.

One day, when you're out
Clip clop walking,
I'll be right behind you.

And you'll be pretty
In your pretty red shoes
And I won't be.

And one day, clip slip
I'll steal your red shoes
And I'll be the pretty one.
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Comments: 24

Masao114 [2017-06-13 18:27:06 +0000 UTC]

the pic's not showing up.

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locke-d [2003-04-24 06:53:36 +0000 UTC]

nice poem

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pinkybrewster [2003-04-17 13:49:22 +0000 UTC]

This is wicked vengeful,

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hardcookie [2003-04-17 02:30:09 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the Wizard of Oz... and quite strangely.. grade 7. You can be Dorothy.
In otherwords.. I like it! haha

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skape7 [2003-04-16 21:40:40 +0000 UTC]

This poem is very disquieting - so underhandedly threatening...makes me wanna keep looking over my shoulder! I love the way you say so much with only the words "clip slip" - like how in a scary movie when you know something really gruesome is happening but you don't actually see it - it makes it scarier. Love this, definate fav - keep up the brilliant work!

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sixhours [2003-04-16 19:21:39 +0000 UTC]

This sounds like me... I hate to admit it, but I can be such a spiteful person sometimes...

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akashka [2003-04-13 19:44:49 +0000 UTC]

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psyko [2003-04-13 19:16:56 +0000 UTC]

yea w00t! take those red shoes. god, what a sweet little poem ^__^

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fireflycatcher [2003-04-12 13:19:32 +0000 UTC]

lol
very nice

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fairyp [2003-04-11 20:07:24 +0000 UTC]

I like it. The quiely threatening tone makes it all sinister

You'll always be prettyin my eyes, darling

-Dave

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oceanborn [2003-04-11 16:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Best deviation I have been too all day.

Hah.

Nice.

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ubetyourboots [2003-04-11 14:21:42 +0000 UTC]

Clever...but I can't shake off this feeling of...angst as I read it.

Sorry--maybe that's just me.

Ube.

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paxtin [2003-04-11 05:52:55 +0000 UTC]

I like its dark feel. It seems like there is more going on then just the love for someone's shoes, but yet at the same time thats all that it is.....did that make any sense?

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--joao-- [2003-04-11 04:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Good idea ... What if I steal someone's talent? That would be cool. :sad laughter:

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triptychr [2003-04-11 00:10:09 +0000 UTC]

It's like a dark kiddy poem. Very nice!

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readytofly [2003-04-10 21:33:51 +0000 UTC]

You have a somewhat sick sense of humor. I like it.

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backwords [2003-04-10 21:32:46 +0000 UTC]


ouch. sounds fun.

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aioyp [2003-04-10 21:19:16 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOO! don't steal my pretty red shoes! I haven't even worn them yet! :huggles shoes: hehe. I likes it. yepyep. *poke*

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abstract-goddess [2003-04-10 20:07:51 +0000 UTC]

As usual, you have a dark sense of humor. Yes, I said it. Humor. I can almost imagine you laughing while writing this. But that's what I like about you. Even the serious is laughable. And even the laughable is serious.

And you are pretty.

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lovelydeirdre [2003-04-10 18:35:13 +0000 UTC]

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yeah, that about somes it all up.

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rainbowskye [2003-04-10 17:51:44 +0000 UTC]

oooh dont steal my shoes!
but.. no.. very nice i ll fav this

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livingbyair [2003-04-10 17:42:56 +0000 UTC]

haha - thats my girl!

STEAL 'EM RED SHOES!

((go figure))

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shefb0yrd [2003-04-10 16:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha, envy will rule us all!

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sexypenguin [2003-04-10 16:20:06 +0000 UTC]

revenge is sweet, and the gruesome battle for beauty is carnal.

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