Comments: 9
kimika56 [2012-04-16 02:38:04 +0000 UTC]
*Squeee* I think I melted at the colored drawing.
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SabrWolf [2012-04-12 14:43:02 +0000 UTC]
I like this picture quite a lot. The detail in the hair is very nice and the shading and contrast in Randal's shirt and shoes and Lys's shorts are very nice. However, I do think that there could be more highlight work done on both character's skin, it seems slightly dull and flat like they've been covered in skin toned matte paint. If you look at Randal's shoulder and how rounded it looks and then look at his exposed bicep and not how flat it seems, you'll see what I'm talking about.
I also really like how much weight Randal's hand seems to carry on Lys's back but I miss that same weight on the hand holding her legs, they seem to just be floating there.
Still I like the way they look and you really did do an excellent job with the hair detail. Keep up the good work!
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LadyInkling In reply to SabrWolf [2012-04-14 03:58:34 +0000 UTC]
I totally forgot the highlights on his bicep! And as to why Trys looks like she's floating, the picture is just when Randal has picked her up. I don't know if I can change the pose now, but I'll see if I can. Thank you for the critique!
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TheHappyToast [2012-04-12 07:45:08 +0000 UTC]
No offense, but you can do WAY better than this...
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LadyInkling In reply to TheHappyToast [2012-04-14 03:54:36 +0000 UTC]
I know, I know, I just needed to get some fan service out of my system. I'm working on a realistic pic over the weekend and I'll try to post it next Tues.
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wingsxdontxfail [2012-04-11 15:45:56 +0000 UTC]
I saw you working on this yesterday! This is awesome! I love the way you color and the proportion of the human body is well done. XD
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LadyInkling In reply to wingsxdontxfail [2012-04-11 20:41:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was paranoid about the anatomy, so it's good to know it came out all right.
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